Can someone give me feedback on my story?

[IDONTKNOWREAL]

Hey guys! I doubt anyone will read this, but if you do try my story “Girl Of Deception”. I’ve been working really hard on it and I hope you all give it a chance. If you read it and like it please let me know and recommend it if possible. Here’s the story description: Aria Lamar has is all. She’s rich, beautiful and smart. But she’s an arrogant jerk and has no compassion. Little does she know that’s all about to change.
Here’s the link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5855942598328320
Thank you so much!
IDONTKNOW

[Episode.vel]

I’ve already read the first chapter and I can say that I’m curious
I’m wondering whats coming for her
Love the story and added to my favorite and I’ll read the rest…
Keep it up

[IDONTKNOWREAL]

Thank you!

[Sydney_H]

Topic moved to Share Feedback since it is requesting feedback. Thanks

[IDONTKNOWREAL]

@Sydney_H you closed my other topic and I was wondering why?

CRITICAL REVIEWS FOR YOUR STORY!

Hi guys! I decided it would be a good idea to help out authors out there by giving the reviews. I will be critical and give you thorough feedback. In return for a long review, I would like you to read the first episode of my story! I will review stories 3 at a time. Your username will be stated below if you are next in line. Make sure to fill out the form and follow the steps below. Steps Make a request by filling out the form Give me a screenshot of you reading the first chapter of my stor…

[Sydney_H]

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