Can someone give me feedback on my story?

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@Sydney_H you closed my other topic and I was wondering why?

CRITICAL REVIEWS FOR YOUR STORY!

Hi guys! I decided it would be a good idea to help out authors out there by giving the reviews. I will be critical and give you thorough feedback. In return for a long review, I would like you to read the first episode of my story! I will review stories 3 at a time. Your username will be stated below if you are next in line. Make sure to fill out the form and follow the steps below. Steps Make a request by filling out the form Give me a screenshot of you reading the first chapter of my stor…