Can someone give me pointers on my story

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I can do read for reads but only one episode

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It’s my first story

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I can whats your story and author name under?

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It’s not published I’ll send a link

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Ok

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I can do read for read

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I aware I’ve read ur stories anyway

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:sweat_smile:

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Omg I love your storys

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Just went through whoever I’ve read

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:sweat_smile::heart: thanks

Just finished your episode
How many lines was it?
It was good!!!

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Thx it was my first story and draft
It is 2796 lines

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What’s the story about?

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Wow!!! Thats a lot of lines!!!
I think your story is perfect maybe make Emma smaller in some scenes :sweat_smile:

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It’s about a new kid arriving at a school and they are signed up to a charity event to stay together for a week

When they can chose to go there separate ways what will they decide??

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It’s called two peas in a pod

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Thx I’ll do that and it’s only my first draft so I can improve

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It was still really good though!!! :grin: keep up the great work​:upside_down_face:

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Thx

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