Can someone give me pointers on my story


#1

I can do read for reads but only one episode


#2

It’s my first story


#3

I can whats your story and author name under?


#4

It’s not published I’ll send a link


#5

Ok


#6

I can do read for read


#7

I aware I’ve read ur stories anyway


#8

:sweat_smile:


#9

http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5967509314207744


#10

Omg I love your storys


#11

Just went through whoever I’ve read


#12

:sweat_smile::heart: thanks

Just finished your episode
How many lines was it?
It was good!!!


#13

Thx it was my first story and draft
It is 2796 lines


#14

What’s the story about?


#15

Wow!!! Thats a lot of lines!!!
I think your story is perfect maybe make Emma smaller in some scenes :sweat_smile:


#16

It’s about a new kid arriving at a school and they are signed up to a charity event to stay together for a week

When they can chose to go there separate ways what will they decide??


#17

It’s called two peas in a pod


#18

Thx I’ll do that and it’s only my first draft so I can improve


#19

It was still really good though!!! :grin: keep up the great work​:upside_down_face:


#20

Thx