Can someone help me by finishing this scene? (Thank you, credit will be given)

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Hello everyone! So I have been working on a scene for about a week now and I want to move on but it isn’t done, can someone finish it for me please?

Credit WILL be given for it! Thank you! Also make sure to check my already done code just in case, thank you!! (We don’t want your bit to look awesome and mine to look like dodo.)

Code/Scene

INT. MC BEDROOM with TEXT_1 with TEXT_2 with TEXT_3 with TEXT_4 with TEXT_5 with TEXT_6 with TEXT_7 with TEXT_8 with TEXT_9 with TEXT_10 with TEXT_11 with TEXT_12 with TEXT_13 with TEXT_14 with TEXT_15 with TEXT_16 with TEXT_17 with UNKNOWN TEXT2 with TEXT BUBBLE with TEXT BUBBLE2 with TEXT BUBBLE3
@cut to zone 2 AND zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 0
@CHRISTINA changes into CHRISTINA_Sleep_4
@CHRISTINA spot 0.605 50 353 in zone 2 AND CHRISTINA is idle_lay_groggy_eyesclosed_loop AND overlay TEXT_1 opacity 0 in 0 AND overlay TEXT_2 opacity 0 in 0 AND overlay UNKNOWN TEXT2 opacity 0 in 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE opacity 0 in 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 opacity 0 in 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 opacity 0 in 0
@CHRISTINA is idle_lay_awake_rubeyes_loop
@CHRISTINA is idle_lay_awake_neutral_loop
@speechbubble is 163 250 to 71% with tail_bottom_right
CHRISTINA
(Do I have any texts or calls?)
@CHRISTINA is idle_sit_anklescrossed_neutral_loop AND CHRISTINA spot 0.605 179 270 in zone 2
@CHRISTINA is standup_neutral AND CHRISTINA spot 0.605 172 221 in zone 2 THEN CHRISTINA is tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear AND CHRISTINA spot 0.605 172 221 in zone 2
@CHRISTINA faces right AND CHRISTINA is read_phone_neutral_loop
@speechbubble is 230 197 to 71% with tail_top_left
CHRISTINA (read_phone_sad_loop)
(Another one from…| animation:flash:3 , italic| them.)

@CHRISTINA is eyeroll_sarcastic

    CHRISTINA (read_phone_sad_loop)
(What do they want now?)

@CHRISTINA is text_phone_neutral_loop
@pause for 0.4
@CHRISTINA is read_phone_neutral_loop
#[Show CHRISTINA’s phone screen and them opening up to the texts from UNKNOWN]
label UNKNOWN_Text1
@overlay TEXT_1 opacity 1 in 0 AND overlay TEXT_2 opacity 1 in 0 AND overlay UNKNOWN TEXT2 opacity 1 in 0 AND zoom on 383 368 to 371% in 1 AND overlay UNKNOWN TEXT2 shifts to 51 278 in zone 2 AND overlay UNKNOWN TEXT2 scales to 0.370 0.370 AND overlay UNKNOWN TEXT2 moves to layer 0 AND overlay TEXT_1 moves to layer 1 AND overlay TEXT_2 moves to layer 2 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE opacity 1 in 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 opacity 1 in 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 opacity 1 in 0
&overlay TEXT BUBBLE shifts to 33 325 in zone 2 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE scales to 0.424 0.424
@pause for 0.5
@overlay TEXT BUBBLE opacity 0 in 0
&overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 shifts to 33 325 in zone 2 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 scales to 0.424 0.424
@pause for 0.5
@overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 opacity 0 in 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 shifts to 33 325 in zone 2 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 scales to 0.424 0.424 THEN pause for 0.5 THEN overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 opacity 0 in 0
@pause for 0.5
@overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 opacity 0 in 0
&overlay TEXT_1 shifts to 51 278 in zone 2 AND overlay TEXT_1 scales to 0.370 0.370 AND overlay TEXT_1 moves to layer 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE moves to layer 1 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 moves to layer 2 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 moves to layer 3
@pause for 3.5
@speechbubble reset
NARRATOR
Have you finished reading the first text from UNKNOWN?
choice “Yes. Mhm.” {
goto UNKNOWN_Text2
} “No.” {
goto UNKNOWN_Text1
}
label UNKNOWN_Text2
@remove overlay TEXT_1
&CHRISTINA is text_phone_neutral_loop
@pause for 0.4
&overlay TEXT_2 shifts to 51 278 in zone 2 AND overlay TEXT_2 scales to 0.370 0.370 AND overlay TEXT_2 moves to layer 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE moves to layer 1 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 moves to layer 2 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 moves to layer 3
@CHRISTINA is read_phone_neutral_loop
sound phone_text
@pause for 3.5
NARRATOR
Have you finished reading the text from Christina?
choice “Yes. Mhm.” {
goto UNKNOWN_Text3and4
} “No.” {
goto UNKNOWN_Text2
}

label UNKNOWN_Text3and4
@remove overlay TEXT_2
@overlay TEXT_3 opacity 1 in 0
@overlay TEXT_3 shifts to 51 278 in zone 2 AND overlay TEXT_3 scales to 0.370 0.370 AND overlay TEXT_3 moves to layer 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE moves to layer 1 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 moves to layer 2 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 moves to layer 3
@overlay TEXT BUBBLE opacity 1 in 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 opacity 0 in 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 opacity 1 in 0
&overlay TEXT BUBBLE shifts to 30 352 in zone 2 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE scales to 0.424 0.424
@pause for 0.5
@overlay TEXT BUBBLE opacity 0 in 0
@overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 opacity 1 in 0
&overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 shifts to 30 352 in zone 2 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE scales to 0.424 0.424
@pause for 0.5
@overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 opacity 0 in 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 shifts to 30 352 in zone 2 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 scales to 0.424 0.424 AND pause for 0.5 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 opacity 0 in 0
@remove overlay UNKNOWN TEXT2
@pause for 0.5
@overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 opacity 0 in 0
@overlay TEXT_4 opacity 1 in 0
@overlay TEXT_4 shifts to 51 278 in zone 2 AND overlay TEXT_4 scales to 0.370 0.370 AND overlay TEXT_4 moves to layer 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE moves to layer 1 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 moves to layer 2 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 moves to layer 3
@pause for 3
NARRATOR
Have you finished reading the fourth text from UNKNOWN?
choice “Yes.” {
goto UNKNOWN_Text5
} “No.” {
goto UNKNOWN_Text3and4
}

label UNKNOWN_Text5
@zoom on 518 92 to 231% in 3
@CHRISTINA is eyeroll_sarcastic THEN CHRISTINA is text_phone_neutral_loop
@CHRISTINA is dustoff_neutral_loop
@CHRISTINA is think_rubchin

    CHRISTINA (read_phone_sad_loop)
(What do they really want?)

sound phone_text
@zoom on 383 368 to 371% in 3
@overlay TEXT_4 shifts to 51 278 in zone 2 AND overlay TEXT_4 scales to 0.370 0.370 AND overlay TEXT_4 moves to layer 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE moves to layer 1 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 moves to layer 2 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 moves to layer 3
@overlay TEXT BUBBLE opacity 1 in 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 opacity 1 in 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 opacity 1 in 0
&overlay TEXT BUBBLE shifts to 29 338 in zone 2 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE scales to 0.424 0.424
@pause for 0.5
@overlay TEXT BUBBLE opacity 0 in 0
&overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 shifts to 29 338 in zone 2 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 scales to 0.424 0.424
@pause for 0.5
@overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 opacity 0 in 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 shifts to 29 338 in zone 2 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 scales to 0.424 0.424 THEN pause for 0.5 THEN overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 opacity 0 in 0
@pause for 0.5
@overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 opacity 0 in 0
@overlay TEXT_5 shifts to 51 278 in zone 2 AND overlay TEXT_5 scales to 0.370 0.370 AND overlay TEXT_5 moves to layer 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE moves to layer 1 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 moves to layer 2 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 moves to layer 3
@CHRISTINA is read_phone_neutral_loop
@CHRISTINA is text_phone_neutral_loop
@zoom on 518 92 to 231% in 3
CHRISTINA
(I’m sure it’s something sentimental like a teddy bear, right?)
@CHRISTINA is read_phone_neutral_loop
NARRATOR
Have you finished reading the text(thought bubble) from Christina?
choice “Yes.” {
goto UNKNOWN_Text6
} “No.” {
goto UNKNOWN_Text5
}
label UNKNOWN_Text6
sound phone_text
@overlay TEXT_6 shifts to 51 278 in zone 2 AND overlay TEXT_6 scales to 0.370 0.370 AND overlay TEXT_6 moves to layer 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE moves to layer 1 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 moves to layer 2 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 moves to layer 3
@CHRISTINA is read_phone_shocked
@CHRISTINA is text_phone_sad_loop
@pause for 2
CHRISTINA (read_phone_shocked)
(My childhood house?! What the…!)

    NARRATOR
Have you finished reading the text and thought bubble from Christina?

choice “Yes.” {
goto UNKNOWN_Text7
} “No.” {
goto UNKNOWN_Text6
}
label UNKNOWN_Text7
sound phone_text
@overlay TEXT BUBBLE opacity 1 in 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 opacity 1 in 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 opacity 1 in 0
&overlay TEXT BUBBLE shifts to 33 325 in zone 2 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE scales to 0.424 0.424
@pause for 0.5
@overlay TEXT BUBBLE opacity 0 in 0
&overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 shifts to 33 325 in zone 2 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 scales to 0.424 0.424
@pause for 0.5
@overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 opacity 0 in 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 shifts to 33 325 in zone 2 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 scales to 0.424 0.424 THEN pause for 0.5 THEN overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 opacity 0 in 0
@remove overlay UNKNOWN TEXT2
@pause for 0.5
@overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 opacity 0 in 0
@overlay TEXT_7 shifts to 51 278 in zone 2 AND overlay TEXT_7 scales to 0.370 0.370 AND overlay TEXT_7 moves to layer 0 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE moves to layer 1 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE2 moves to layer 2 AND overlay TEXT BUBBLE3 moves to layer 3
@pause for 3.5
@CHRISTINA is text_phone_sad_loop
#CHRISTINA: It’s not like I can just walk in there. I haven’t lived there for years.

sound phone_text

#UNKNOWN: I know, not since 2029 when your aunt died from cancer.

    CHRISTINA (read_phone_shocked)
(How the hell do they know that?!)

@CHRISTINA is text_phone_sad_loop
#CHRISTINA: STOP PLAYING WITH ME! I DON’T want anything from you!

#CHRISTINA: Is making me relive my past just some sick joke to you?
@CHRISTINA is read_phone_sad_loop

sound phone_text
#UNKNOWN: There’s a reason for everything Christian/Christian. It’ll all come to light soon enough.
#NOW, STOP WASTING TIME! GO! You won’t regret it!
@CHRISTINA is text_phone_sad_loop
#CHRISTINA: I wouldn’t be so sure about that.
@CHRISTINA is read_phone_sad_loop

sound phone_text
@CHRISTINA is read_phone_shocked_loop
#UNKNOWN: Just go now. The longer you wait, the worse your present will smell.

    CHRISTINA (read_phone_sad_loop)
(Oh my god. I don't want to go because I know exactly what they are saying.)

    CHRISTINA (deepbreath)
(But, I guess that I don't have a choice.)

INT. MC BEDROOM BATHROOM
@cut to zone 3
@CHRISTINA changes into CHRISTINA_Sleep_4
&CHRISTINA spot 0.776 119 208 in zone 3 AND CHRISTINA is idle_rear
@pause for 1
@CHRISTINA walks to spot 0.704 159 268 AND CHRISTINA does it while walk_neutral_loop_rear
INT. BATHROOM - DAY
@CHRISTINA changes into CHRISTINA_Sleep_4
@CHRISTINA spot 0.893 -43 126 THEN CHRISTINA walks to spot 0.893 165 157
@pause for 1
&speechbubble is 221 263 to 83% with tail_top_left
CHRISTINA (sigh_disappointed)
(I’d better get ready quickly)
&speechbubble reset

Overlays

TEXT BUBBLE
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TEXT BUBBLE2
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TEXT BUBBLE3
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TEXT_1
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TEXT_2
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TEXT_3
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TEXT_4
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TEXT_5
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TEXT_6
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TEXT_7
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TEXT_8
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TEXT_9
image

TEXT_10
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TEXT_11
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TEXT_12
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TEXT_13
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TEXT_14
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TEXT_15
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TEXT_16
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TEXT_17

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image421×750 56.2 KB

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Are you having a hard time moving on or you just don’t feel like finishing :sweat_smile: :joy: (relatable)

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Essentially the overlays are being a pain and it’s been taking me forever. I WANT to finish :sweat_smile:.

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If you are willing to help, I love you.

5

:joy: I would but…I don’t even feel like finishing my own scene :sweat_smile:

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I-

Okay.

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Bump!

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Bump!

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@episodemichi could you help out please? @eliseclairmont will upload all the overlays here.

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Oh my! That’s long

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Okay what do you want me to?

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Sorry! So essentially just copy and pasting the overlay coding commands I did above and making them work for the new ones you will do. This means shifiting the overlays and texting in progress bubbles.

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Text 1
Text 1421×750 72.9 KB
Text 2
Text 2421×750 102 KB
Text 3
Text 3421×750 34.4 KB
Text 4
Text 4421×750 37.9 KB
Text 5
Text 5421×750 46.4 KB
Text 6
Text 6421×750 54.3 KB
Text 7
Text 7421×750 59 KB
Text 8
Text 8421×750 62 KB
Text 9
Text 9421×750 72.4 KB
Text 10
Text 10421×750 27.3 KB
Text 11
Text 11421×750 36.1 KB
Text 12
Text 12421×750 46.8 KB
Text 13
Text 13421×750 56.7 KB
Text 14
Text 14421×750 68.9 KB
Text 15
Text 15421×750 29.5 KB
Text 15a
Text 15a421×750 29.5 KB
Text 16
Text 16421×750 39.4 KB
Text 17
Text 17421×750 44.9 KB
Text 18
Text 18421×750 56.4 KB

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Are those overlay or background

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Thank you, Élise!

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Overlays

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You want me to code it in episode?

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Well, you can code it on yours or do it on ours, either works.

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Like in your portal?

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Yeah. Either works. As long as we get the end product.

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