Can someone help me correct my script, please?

[Jen_Rae]

Hi there! I’m trying to make the character, Athena to enter from the right side in zone 3. But she keeps on entering in the wrong place. Here’s my script. please help me.

Summary

INT. FLOWER SHOP - DAY

@zoom reset

@MR STEVENSON spot 0.812 259 236 in zone 1 AND MR STEVENSON faces left

&MR STEVENSON is tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear

@MRS TAYLOR spot 0.749 192 235 in zone 3 AND MRS TAYLOR faces left

&MRS TAYLOR is think_rubchin

@SARAH spot 0.938 64 143 in zone 1 AND SARAH faces right

&SARAH is talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop

@MAXIMUS spot 0.965 187 163 in zone 1 AND MAXIMUS faces left

&MAXIMUS is talk_handsonhips_neutral_loop

@MRS STEVENSON spot 0.929 94 163 in zone 2 AND MRS STEVENSON faces right

&MRS STEVENSON is idle_pregnant_happy_loop

@MIRA spot 0.884 205 175 in zone 2 AND MIRA faces left

&MIRA is talk_neutral_loop

@transition fade in black 2

@add Moving Box to SONIA

@SONIA enters from left to screen center AND SONIA does it while walk_box_neutral_loop

@follow SONIA to screen right in zone 3 in 5 AND SONIA does it while walk_box_neutral_loop

@SONIA exits right AND SONIA does it while walk_box_neutral_loop

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

@ATHENA changes into ATHENA_original1

@add Moving Box to ATHENA

@ATHENA enters from right to screen center in zone 3 AND ATHENA does it while walk_box_neutral_loop

@follow ATHENA to screen right in zone 1 in 5 AND ATHENA does it while walk_box_neutral_loop

@ATHENA is idle_box_carry_neutral_loop

[kaiden_doestuff]

Okay so what I think you should do is cut to zone 3 first THEN make her enter. So,
@cut to zone 3
@ATHENA enters from right to screen center AND ATHENA does it while walk_box_neutral_loop

[Jen_Rae]

oh okay!

[Jen_Rae]

It didn’t really do anything. But thx for your help!

[Jen_Rae]

Can someone help, me please?

[aze_nieve]

Spot Walking (Walking w/Spot Direction)

Hiiiii I’m RudeInception and today we will be discussing Spot Walking (term I’ve made up). This method will allow you to walk your character all around a scene while the character stays in the size and position you chose while Spot Directing. (What’s that? Spot Directing Guide) Here we go: The general command is @CHAR walks to spot S X Y in zone # in T S = size of the CHAR (default size is 1.280) X = X axis (left to right) Y = Y axis (up and down) zone # = the zone number (1…

This helps a lot

[Jen_Rae]

Oh okay! Thx!

[aze_nieve]

Let me know if you’re still stuck

[Jen_Rae]

Okay!

[Jen_Rae]

It still won’t work

[Jen_Rae]

I think i will just change the script

[kaiden_doestuff]

Yeah, I would suggest to just pan while she’s walking instead of using the follow command

[Jen_Rae]

Oh okay.

[kaiden_doestuff]

If you need help with that, I’d be happy to help! That’s all I can think of doing to make it work instead, that’s what I usually do anyways haha

[Leva1]

Hii. Hope you are doing great.
Maybe you could try and spot direct Athena… Instead of using the basic directing… …

[MiyakoMiyu]

@Jen_Rae

@ATHENA enters from right to screen center in zone 3 AND ATHENA does it while walk_box_neutral_loop

@follow ATHENA to screen right in zone 1 in 5 AND ATHENA does it while walk_box_neutral_loop

@ATHENA is idle_box_carry_neutral_loop

Try:

&/ATHENA stands screen right in zone 3 and ATHENA faces left
&/ATHENA walks to screen center in zone 1 in 5 and ATHENA does it while walk_box_neutral_loop
@/follow ATHENA to screen right in zone 1 in 5 THEN ATHENA is idle_box_carry_neutral_loop

if camera doesn’t work try:

@/pan to zone 1 in 5 instead of follow

[Jen_Rae]

Thank you! But I actually changes the script…thank you for your help, though!