Can someone help me with my script plz :P

Hi can someone pls help me with my script? cos no matter what I do it dont go the way I want it. I have three characters on screen btw
so i have my character walking and I am panning to zone 2 and do the animation together. but when she walks she does animation and i dont want! then I want too have a characterand do a new animation but I dont see then for my last character I wants her too turn left and do eye roll animation but it dont show ! it just show her face when she dont eye roll hopefully my english was oki sorry if it bad

this is my scirpt btw

EXT. COFFEE SHOP DANA NIGHT with COFFEE SHOP OV with COFFEE SHOP COUNTER with COFFEE SHOP TABLE with COFFEE SHOP CHAIR DANA

&pan to zone 2

@add Text Book Open Navy Blue to FRANCISCO

&GIANNA spot 0.964 -83 131 in zone 1 at layer 7 AND GIANNA faces right AND GIANNA is idle
& GIANNA walks to spot 0.964 96 138 in zone 2 in 2 AND GIANNA does it while walk_neutral_loop

&ZOREN spot 0.790 173 252 in zone 2 at layer 2 AND ZOREN faces right AND ZOREN is talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop

&FRANCISCO spot 0.756 63 264 in zone 1 at layer 5 AND FRANCISCO faces left AND FRANCISCO is read_sit_book_open_neutral_loop

&PENELOPE spot 0.924 238 154 in zone 2 at layer 8 AND PENELOPE faces right AND PENELOPE is idle_handsonhips_loop_rear

&ZOREN is talk_sheepish_rubneck

&GIANNA is idle_armscrossed_awkward_loop

&PENELOPE faces left THEN PENELOPE is eyeroll_sarcastic

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EXT. COFFEE SHOP DANA NIGHT with COFFEE SHOP OV with COFFEE SHOP COUNTER with COFFEE SHOP TABLE with COFFEE SHOP CHAIR DANA

@add Text Book Open Navy Blue to FRANCISCO

&pan to zone 2

&GIANNA spot 0.964 -83 131 in zone 1 at layer 7 AND GIANNA faces right AND GIANNA is idle
& GIANNA walks to spot 0.964 96 138 in zone 2 in 2 AND GIANNA does it while walk_neutral_loop

&ZOREN spot 0.790 173 252 in zone 2 at layer 2 AND ZOREN faces right AND ZOREN is talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop

&FRANCISCO spot 0.756 63 264 in zone 1 at layer 5 AND FRANCISCO faces left AND FRANCISCO is read_sit_book_open_neutral_loop

&PENELOPE spot 0.924 238 154 in zone 2 at layer 8 AND PENELOPE faces right AND PENELOPE is idle_handsonhips_loop_rear

@pause for 2.1

&ZOREN is talk_sheepish_rubneck

&GIANNA is idle_armscrossed_awkward_loop

&PENELOPE faces left THEN PENELOPE is eyeroll_sarcastic

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so it kind of work but when i use @ for pause for a beat overlays are not in the right place but when i use & the overlay are in right place but the characters dont do the animation anymore

this is my whole script

EXT. COFFEE SHOP DANA NIGHT with COFFEE SHOP OV with COFFEE SHOP COUNTER with COFFEE SHOP TABLE with COFFEE SHOP CHAIR DANA

&pan to zone 2

@add Text Book Open Navy Blue to FRANCISCO

&GIANNA spot 0.964 -83 131 in zone 1 at layer 7 AND GIANNA faces right AND GIANNA is idle
& GIANNA walks to spot 0.964 96 138 in zone 2 in 2 AND GIANNA does it while walk_neutral_loop

&ZOREN spot 0.790 173 252 in zone 2 at layer 2 AND ZOREN faces right AND ZOREN is talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop

&FRANCISCO spot 0.756 63 264 in zone 1 at layer 5 AND FRANCISCO faces left AND FRANCISCO is read_sit_book_open_neutral_loop

&PENELOPE spot 0.924 238 154 in zone 2 at layer 8 AND PENELOPE faces right AND PENELOPE is idle_handsonhips_loop_rear

@pause for a beat

&ZOREN is talk_sheepish_rubneck

&GIANNA is idle_armscrossed_awkward_loop

&PENELOPE faces left THEN PENELOPE is eyeroll_sarcastic

&overlay COFFEE SHOP OV shifts to -2 -4 in zone 1
&overlay COFFEE SHOP OV scales to 0.808 0.808
&overlay COFFEE SHOP OV rotates 0 anchor point 0 0
&overlay COFFEE SHOP OV to layer 0
&overlay COFFEE SHOP OV opacity 1

&overlay COFFEE SHOP COUNTER shifts to 34 50 in zone 2
&overlay COFFEE SHOP COUNTER scales to 0.636 0.636
&overlay COFFEE SHOP COUNTER moves to layer 3

&overlay COFFEE SHOP TABLE shifts to 34 142 in zone 1
&overlay COFFEE SHOP TABLE scales to 0.592 0.592
&overlay COFFEE SHOP TABLE moves to layer 3

&overlay COFFEE SHOP CHAIR DANA shifts to 49 173 in zone 1
&overlay COFFEE SHOP CHAIR DANA scales to 0.432 0.432
&overlay COFFEE SHOP CHAIR DANA rotates 0 anchor point 0 0
&overlay COFFEE SHOP CHAIR DANA to layer 1
&overlay COFFEE SHOP CHAIR DANA opacity 1

&overlay COFFEE SHOP TABLE 2 create from COFFEE SHOP TABLE
&overlay COFFEE SHOP TABLE 2 create from COFFEE SHOP TABLE
&overlay COFFEE SHOP TABLE 2 opacity 100% in 0

&overlay COFFEE SHOP TABLE 2 shifts to -56 71 in zone 1
&overlay COFFEE SHOP TABLE 2 scales to 0.752 0.752
&overlay COFFEE SHOP TABLE 2 moves to layer 6

&overlay COFFEE SHOP CHAIR 2 create from COFFEE SHOP CHAIR DANA
&overlay COFFEE SHOP CHAIR 2 opacity 100% in 0

&overlay COFFEE SHOP CHAIR 2 shifts to 14 121 in zone 1
&overlay COFFEE SHOP CHAIR 2 scales to 0.480 0.480
&overlay COFFEE SHOP CHAIR 2 rotates 0 anchor point 0 0
&overlay COFFEE SHOP CHAIR 2 to layer 4
&overlay COFFEE SHOP CHAIR 2 opacity 1

&overlay COFFEE SHOP CHAIR 3 create from COFFEE SHOP CHAIR DANA
&overlay COFFEE SHOP CHAIR 3 shifts to 131 168 in zone 1
&overlay COFFEE SHOP CHAIR 3 scales to 0.444 0.444
&overlay COFFEE SHOP CHAIR 3 rotates 0 anchor point 0 0
&overlay COFFEE SHOP CHAIR 3 to layer 0
&overlay COFFEE SHOP CHAIR 3 opacity 1

@pause for 10

omg hehe nvm i fixed it :joy: :joy: :joy: thenk you so much for your help friend :yellow_heart: