Hello, I need help with my story description since I am really bad at it
Story title: The Star Crossed Lovers
She is a girl, who is currently one of the most famous Hollywood actresses. Her marriage slowly begins to fall apart, until she meets Benjamin, the actor who will star with her in the new movie. Benjamin was the most beautiful guy she had ever seen, her husband could not be compared to him. Something about him interested her. Benjamin already had a fiancée, but that didn’t stop him from falling madly in love with her. What happens to people who fall madly in love, at the wrong time, in the wrong place, but who are definitely for each other.
I mean this is like a little longer story description, but I need someone to make it shorter if possible.
Btw would you read something like this?