Can someone help me with this American football scene

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Hey, can someone help me with this football scene? I have a football overlay as well that I’d like to use.
I have six people in the scene and I just want them to pass the balls to each other. with some animation added. This is what I have, but it looks weird

EXT. SOCCER FIELD

&cut to zone 3

@cut to zone 4

@TAYLOR spot 0.830 155 202 in zone 4 AND TAYLOR moves to layer 5 AND TAYLOR faces right
@ZACK spot 0.950 108 166 in zone 4 AND ZACK moves to layer 5 AND ZACK faces right
@LIAM spot 1.067 52 11 in zone 4 AND LIAM moves to layer 6 AND LIAM faces right

@pause for 4

@pan to zone 5

@NOAH spot 0.830 129 218 in zone 5 AND NOAH moves to layer 5 AND NOAH faces left
@OLIVER spot 0.957 172 150 in zone 5 AND OLIVER moves to layer 5 AND OLIVER faces left
@JOHN spot 1.053 226 102 in zone 5 AND JOHN moves to layer 6 AND JOHN faces left

@pause for 4

@cut to zone 4

@add Football Leather Brown to TAYLOR

@add Football Leather Brown to ZACK

@add Football Leather Brown to LIAM

@TAYLOR is pass_football_serious

@TAYLOR is idle

@remove Football Leather Brown from TAYLOR

@pan to zone 5

@NOAH is catch_ball_happy

@add Football Leather Brown to NOAH

@add Football Leather Brown to OLIVER

@add Football Leather Brown to JOHN

@NOAH is pass_football_serious

@remove Football Leather Brown from NOAH

@NOAH is idle

@JOHN is pass_football_serious

@remove Football Leather Brown from JOHN

@JOHN is idle

@OLIVER is pass_football_serious

@remove Football Leather Brown from OLIVER

@OLIVER is idle

@pan to zone 4

@TAYLOR is catch_ball_happy

@add Football Leather Brown to TAYLOR

@ZACK is catch_ball_happy

@add Football Leather Brown to ZACK

@LIAM is catch_ball_happy

@add Football Leather Brown to LIAM

@pan to zone 5

@NOAH is catch_ball_happy

@add Football Leather Brown to NOAH

@add Football Leather Brown to OLIVER

@add Football Leather Brown to JOHN

@NOAH is pass_football_serious

@remove Football Leather Brown from NOAH

@NOAH is idle

@JOHN is pass_football_serious

@remove Football Leather Brown from JOHN

@JOHN is idle

@OLIVER is pass_football_serious

@remove Football Leather Brown from OLIVER

@OLIVER is idle

@pan to zone 4

@TAYLOR is catch_ball_happy

@add Football Leather Brown to TAYLOR

@ZACK is catch_ball_happy

@add Football Leather Brown to ZACK

@LIAM is catch_ball_happy

@remove Football Leather Brown from LIAM

@remove Football Leather Brown from NOAH

@remove Football Leather Brown from OLIVER

@remove Football Leather Brown from JOHN

@remove Football Leather Brown from ZACK

@remove Football Leather Brown from TAYLOR

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EXT. SOCCER FIELD

&TAYLOR spot 0.830 155 202 in zone 4 AND TAYLOR moves to layer 4 AND TAYLOR faces right AND TAYLOR is idle_ball_cradle_neutral_loop
&ZACK spot 0.950 112 127 in zone 4 AND ZACK moves to layer 5 AND ZACK faces right AND ZACK is idle_ball_cradle_neutral_loop
&LIAM spot 1.067 52 11 in zone 4 AND LIAM moves to layer 6 AND LIAM faces right AND LIAM is idle_ball_cradle_neutral_loop
&NOAH spot 0.830 129 218 in zone 5 AND NOAH moves to layer 4 AND NOAH faces left
&OLIVER spot 0.957 172 150 in zone 5 AND OLIVER moves to layer 5 AND OLIVER faces left AND OLIVER is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
&JOHN spot 1.053 226 102 in zone 5 AND JOHN moves to layer 6 AND JOHN faces left
@add Football Leather Brown to TAYLOR
@add Football Leather Brown to ZACK
@add Football Leather Brown to LIAM

@cut to zone 4
@pause for 4

@pan to zone 5 in 1
&JOHN is primp_neutral

@pause for 4
@cut to zone 4

@TAYLOR is pass_football_serious
@remove Football Leather Brown from TAYLOR
@TAYLOR is idle

@pan to zone 5 in 0.5

@remove Football Leather Brown from TAYLOR
@remove Football Leather Brown from ZACK
@remove Football Leather Brown from LIAM
&TAYLOR is catch_ball_happy
&ZACK is catch_ball_happy
&LIAM is catch_ball_happy

@add Football Leather Brown to NOAH
@NOAH is catch_ball_happy

@add Football Leather Brown to OLIVER
@OLIVER is catch_ball_happy

@add Football Leather Brown to JOHN
@JOHN is catch_ball_happy

@NOAH is pass_football_serious
@remove Football Leather Brown from NOAH
&NOAH is idle

@JOHN is pass_football_serious
@remove Football Leather Brown from JOHN
&JOHN is idle

@OLIVER is pass_football_serious
@remove Football Leather Brown from OLIVER
&OLIVER is idle

@cut to zone 4

@add Football Leather Brown to TAYLOR
@TAYLOR is catch_ball_happy

@add Football Leather Brown to ZACK
@ZACK is catch_ball_happy

@add Football Leather Brown to LIAM
@LIAM is catch_ball_happy

@remove Football Leather Brown from NOAH
@remove Football Leather Brown from OLIVER
@remove Football Leather Brown from JOHN

@pan to zone 5 in 0.7

@add Football Leather Brown to NOAH
@NOAH is catch_ball_happy

@add Football Leather Brown to OLIVER
@OLIVER is catch_ball_happy

@add Football Leather Brown to JOHN
@JOHN is catch_ball_happy

@remove Football Leather Brown from TAYLOR
@remove Football Leather Brown from ZACK
@remove Football Leather Brown from LIAM

@NOAH is pass_football_serious
@remove Football Leather Brown from NOAH
&NOAH is idle

@JOHN is pass_football_serious
@remove Football Leather Brown from JOHN
&JOHN is idle

@OLIVER is pass_football_serious
@remove Football Leather Brown from OLIVER
&OLIVER is idle

@cut to zone 4

@add Football Leather Brown to TAYLOR
@TAYLOR is catch_ball_happy

@add Football Leather Brown to ZACK
@ZACK is catch_ball_happy

@add Football Leather Brown to LIAM
@LIAM is catch_ball_happy

@remove Football Leather Brown from NOAH
@remove Football Leather Brown from OLIVER
@remove Football Leather Brown from JOHN
@remove Football Leather Brown from ZACK
@remove Football Leather Brown from TAYLOR
@remove Football Leather Brown from LIAM
&TAYLOR is idle
&ZACK is laugh_giggle
@LIAM is deepbreath

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