It’s a fairly important scene I need to add. And nobody who usually helps has time right now.
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That’s off-topic, and insanely annoying.
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Yeah… I’m gonna flag this as spam.
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@AMagic dont worry about it just stay on topic. @Allie_Diamond_Epy dont forget to send me the link to your story so i can c heck out the scene for your directing help.
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It depends what’s the scene?
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The LI Eli, gets jealous of the MC’s cousin, Jamie because she has a closer bond to Anna (MC) than she does herself.
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I don’t think I can do it. Sorry.
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what scenery/background?
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Any. It has multipule but one is school and another is a park.
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So, what’s specifically supposed to happen? Is Eli going to argue with Jamie or Anna? Or are they just going to give Jamie dirty looks from a distance? What does jealous mean in this scene?
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She’s frustrated at Anna for spending less time with her than Jamie (Jamie’s Transgender. Anna hasn’t seen her in years) and Jamie for “stealing” her time with Anna
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@Sydney_H
It’s in wrong category I think
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I would but school got me. however, I’m not busy at 5:00 pm
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thanks
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