It’s a fairly important scene I need to add. And nobody who usually helps has time right now.
That’s off-topic, and insanely annoying.
Yeah… I’m gonna flag this as spam.
It depends what’s the scene?
The LI Eli, gets jealous of the MC’s cousin, Jamie because she has a closer bond to Anna (MC) than she does herself.
I don’t think I can do it. Sorry.
Any. It has multipule but one is school and another is a park.
So, what’s specifically supposed to happen? Is Eli going to argue with Jamie or Anna? Or are they just going to give Jamie dirty looks from a distance? What does jealous mean in this scene?
She’s frustrated at Anna for spending less time with her than Jamie (Jamie’s Transgender. Anna hasn’t seen her in years) and Jamie for “stealing” her time with Anna
It’s in wrong category I think
I would but school got me. however, I’m not busy at 5:00 pm
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