Can Someone Please Help Please


#1

Can Someone Please Help, there are no errors in my script but it says this


#2

Send your script?


#3


#4

do you see the problem


#5

copy and paste your script to chat Cant see with all the blurryness


#6

INT. WOODEN HOTEL - DAY
@zoom reset
music music_stringwaltz
sound ambient_thunderstorm_lp
@XEA changes into Pjs
@XEA spot 0.713 416 379
@XEA faces left
@XEA is sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop

@zoom on 192 217 to 398% in 1.1

volume sound 10 1000

@XEA is sleep_lay_uncomfortable_awaken

    XEA
(Wow, it sure is raining hard this morning)

@zoom on 98 0 to 262% in 1.2

&XEA spot 1.010 120 136
@XEA is standup_neutral

@XEA is read_phone_neutral_loop

@zoom on 84 399 to 239% in 1.1

    XEA (read_phone_neutral_loop)
(I wonder what's new today?)

@zoom on 84 399 to 478% in 2.3

@pause for 0.1

&zoom on 112 389 to 464% in 0.8
@XEA is read_phone_gasp_shocked

    XEA
(This can't be real.)

volume music 0 3000

music music_stringwaltz

@zoom on 61 353 to 1016% in 1.6

@transition fade out black 0.8

INT. SCHOOL OFFICE - DAY with SELFIE FEMALE 3
@cut to zone 2
@zoom reset
sound off
@pause for 0.1
&overlay SELFIE FEMALE 3 shifts to -10 -44 in zone 2
&overlay SELFIE FEMALE 3 scales to 1.234 1.234 in zone 2
@MS NELSON stands screen center
@MS NELSON faces right

&overlay SELFIE FEMALE 3 opacity 0 in 2.8

    MS NELSON (talk_gossip_atcamera)
Hello,

Avatar - Name Input {

    NARRATOR
So... what's your name?

label first_name_input

input What’s Your First Name?|What’s Your First Name?|Done(FIRSTNAME)

if (FIRSTNAME is “”) {

    NARRATOR
You do need a name...

goto first_name_input

} else {
continue
}

#}

    MS NELSON (talk_gossip_atcamera)
Ah, Ms. [FIRSTNAME] I'm so honored to say you have been  ACCEPTED, into Lock Wood Academy.
With you advanced knowledge, we would like you to start immediately.

INT. WOODEN HOTEL - DAY
@zoom reset
sound off
music music_stringwaltz
@XEA changes into Pjs
&XEA spot 1.010 120 136

    XEA (talk_angry)

THIS WAS SENT AN HOUR AGO!!!


#7

what was the error box saying? what was the problem?


#8

I guess it was the avatar template.

@Dara.Amarie


#9

Its on the top


#10

Really it was working fine


#11

hm…

@Apes
@JemU776


#12

Isn’t this background called INT. SCHOOL OFFICE OL - DAY (unless you uploaded your own background)

Other than that, everything seems fine


#13

Yeah thats my own bg


#14

is it approved?


#15

Yes


#16

OK, I’ll PM you ^^


#17

Should be @transition fade out black in 0.8

I don’t have any experience in typed-in choices, but I don’t think you need a label for the name. I believe the label is only for unlocking choices. Especially since you have nothing filled in between the quotes:

Refer to Dara’s thread on typed-in choices:


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