Can someone please review my new story? Feedback needed!


#1


Thank you :wink:


#2

Of course.
I’ll check your story!


#3

I just finished the first one and it looks really well :ok_hand: The only thing is that I have a feeling about the zoom when 2 people are talking ; for example when Kalani and Kai were talking I felt like the zoom wasn’t centered well. Everything else is good :slight_smile:


#4