Can someone please review my story?!

Hey guys! I´ve published my story a few days ago and I’d be so happy if someone read it and tell me where I can improve. The link:

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Hey girl, so I just finished our three episodes for our R4R and I can give you some feedback too, if you’d like?

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Ofc I’d like, please

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Here’s what I noticed in your episodes

-grammar mistakes
-your spot directing in some scenes are off
-some of your zooms are off as well
-your speech bubbles are out of place (makes it kinda hard to see who’s talking)

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Thank u for helping me

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