Title : Love in different layers
Total episodes : 6 (on going)
Style : LL
Story description: popular and spoiled- you don’t know how not to get your ways, when he enters your life you’re everything he hates. Will hate will lead to love?
Extra : full CC / choices matter / art scenes
Link : https://episodeinteractive.com/s/i/5171300949360640
ill check it out and message you the errors.
Thank youuu, I’m a new writer and forgive me if there’s any grammar errors, English is not my native language
it’s okay! There are others in the community that English isn’t their native language.
Once again thank you
Hi lovely! For your first story, it’s pretty decent! I do have a suggestion but nothing major!
- If the character is going out and it’s to an event such as a party or dinner, give us options on what to wear (make about 3 outfits for us to choose from and let us choose our favourite)
Apart from this, you’ve done really well and I’ll continue to read it as you post!
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Thank youuu To be honest I’m too lazy to make the characters outfits because writing script and coding it’s so hard and take a lot of time, but at least I let people choose MC’s outfit once / episode
Can someone grammars check on my episode 7 before I publish is?
I can proofread for you x
I could too.
Hii would you mind checking my new story?
Here’s the story info
Story : LOVE IN DIFFERENT LAYERS
Author : Apriliazeva
Story kind : Limelight
Genre : Romance, Comedy
Episode : 7
Story Description : popular and spoiled- you don’t know how not to get your ways. When he enters your life you’re everything he hates, will hate lead to love?
Extras : FULL CC / Art scenes / Choices Matter
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5171300949360640
I will check that out!
Thanks please give a feedback
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