Can someone proofreading my story? I’ll give a shoutout

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Story info:
Title : Love in different layers
Total episodes : 6 (on going)
Style : LL
Story description: popular and spoiled- you don’t know how not to get your ways, when he enters your life you’re everything he hates. Will hate will lead to love?
Extra : full CC / choices matter / art scenes
Link : https://episodeinteractive.com/s/i/5171300949360640

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ill check it out and message you the errors.

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Thank youuu, I’m a new writer and forgive me if there’s any grammar errors, English is not my native language

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it’s okay! There are others in the community that English isn’t their native language.

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Once again thank you :sob::pray:t2:

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Np :wink:

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Hi lovely! For your first story, it’s pretty decent! I do have a suggestion but nothing major!

  • If the character is going out and it’s to an event such as a party or dinner, give us options on what to wear (make about 3 outfits for us to choose from and let us choose our favourite)

Apart from this, you’ve done really well and I’ll continue to read it as you post!

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Moved to Share Feedback since you’re looking for proofreading. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about creating topics, and feel free to PM me if you’ve got questions. :wink:

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Thank youuu :slight_smile: To be honest I’m too lazy to make the characters outfits :joy: because writing script and coding it’s so hard and take a lot of time, but at least I let people choose MC’s outfit once / episode

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Can someone grammars check on my episode 7 before I publish is?

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I can proofread for you x

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I could too.

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Hii would you mind checking my new story? :slight_smile::slight_smile:
Here’s the story info
Story : LOVE IN DIFFERENT LAYERS
Author : Apriliazeva
Story kind : Limelight
Genre : Romance, Comedy
Episode : 7
Story Description : popular and spoiled- you don’t know how not to get your ways. When he enters your life you’re everything he hates, will hate lead to love?
Extras : FULL CC / Art scenes / Choices Matter
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5171300949360640

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I will check that out!

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Thanks please give a feedback :slight_smile:

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