Can someone read my first episode beginning?

Hello :heart:

Can someone read my first episode beginning :joy:
It is my first story and Episode isn’t even completed but I am going to make more in time :joy:
It is very bad so… Please tell me what can be better?

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Thank you so much!
I am going to make points system a little bit different!
I am going to use overlays
I am so happy that you enjoyed it! I thought it is verrrrry bad :joy:

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