Can someone read my first episode?


#1

Can someone read the first episode of my story? and tell me what i can fix? it will mean so much to me.


#2

#3

I’d be happy to!!


#4

Thank u sm!! i posted the link x


#5

Okay so I’ve read your story and I have to say, I loooooveee the storyline!! One thing to improve on though, when your character hugs/kisses someone just make sure they are facing the right way because for some reason they always face the opposite direction so just be aware!! But I will definitely be looking for this story on the app once you’ve published!! :heartbeat::grin:


#6

Yeah ive tried to fix that ahaha, thank you so much girl! means so much <3 xxx


#7

Don’t worry about it!! :slightly_smiling_face:


#8

What is your story called??


#9

Nothings going on


#10

Okieeee <3


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