Can Someone Read My Story And Give Me Some Feedback On The First Few Episodes And Tell Me If I Need To Rename The Episodes?

Can Someone Please Do This For Me? It Would Mean A Lot, Especally Telling Me If I Need To Rename Episodes. If you’re interested, tell me and I’ll send you the link.

I’m interested :sweat_smile:

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Thank you so much! Here’s the Link:

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I will start reading now :))

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Okay!

Hey I’m interested in reading your new story please send the link.

I will love to help and provide feedback! :heart:

Awesome!
Thanks!
The link is above in two places!

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Do you have a Instagram? So I can DM you my thoughts and etc.

Yep!

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Okay, mine is episode.jasmine.stories I get to your story soon!

Kk!

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Hi

I can! What’s the link?

I read the first part of your story,here’s my feedback :

I don’t know how the plot is going to proceed after they meet and catch up. The pauses are awkwardly long. Also it would be nice to customize the characters. Oh and the plot seems to be moving too fast. And not to sound mean but Emma’s situation is a tad cliche.

Well, you seem to be the only one who thinks it’s cliche but thanks for your feedback.

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I was only referring to her situation, like her parents were divorced etc

Oh! Okay.