Can someone read my story so far idk I feel like I’m losing hope and I kinda wanna hear thoughts of where I could improve. Ignore the ‘intro’ if it where I’m going to comeback to that when I finish.
Description
-Male MC- Your arranged and prestigious marriage all starts to crumble when your bride unveils to lead an underground organisation…
Yes I will lol
I love the storyline please don’t lose hope I can already tell that the story is going to be really good. The only thing I’ll say is that it kinda feels like it’s moving a little fast but maybe that’s just me. I would definitely love to read more!!
Should I do a scene after the flashback?
No but you should let us know that the first scene is a flashback as it took me a while to realise and you should give us some sort of context as to what is happening and why it’s happening and the time period it’s happening in and the kind of society that the story is based in (hope I made sense lol)
Yeah I’ll work on that. Thank you 
Let me know when the story is out because your story is a must read!
Lol dw I will 
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