Can someone read our 3 chapters before publishing? No passes

Hey! So we are about to publish the first 3 chapters of our story, but we’d love some feedback first if possible.
We’d love brutally honest feedback, and what you’d like to happen next etc.

it wouldn’t cost you any passes since it’s not published.

Is anyone up for it?

I can do it but I didn’t understand exactly what you need…

Great! I need someone to see if everything is coming together nicely, and if the storytelling and animations are okay"

Alright I can do it just tell me how…:sweat_smile:

Hey i sent you a message with the link ^^

I am reading it now

I can do it just send me the link

hey! If you’re looking for a third opinion, PM me anytime!

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