Hi me and @Mitt are entering the college contest and we are having second thoughts about our first episode lenght. It’s really long and we are thinking about splitting it to two chapters, but a lot of the episode are flashbacks so we aren’t really sure. Can someone please read our first episode and give us feedback? (Mainly about the lenght, but we will appreciate feedback about other things too )
Please don’t judge by the title, we promise it’s not some cringy story about falling in love with your professor
I just finished reading the first episode! I personally don’t mind long episodes, but I do believe it would help if you split the first episode into two episodes. Especially since you are entering the contest, I think it would help Reader Retention since they account for that in their scoring, and some readers prefer shorter chapters.
That being said, I really enjoyed it though - it’s really fun seeing a different perspective. And the directing is fantastic!! There’s a lot of unique elements to the story, and I’m excited to see more!
No problem! I’ll definitely read it when you guys publish it!
I would be really happy to have your feedback
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