Can someone read the first episode of my unpublished story?

Would someone be able to give me feedback on my first episode of my unpublished story.
It’s ink and it has a lot of swear words in hope that’s okay.
Pm me for the link!

I’ll take a look but be aware that if it has a lot of swearing it may go against the guidelines.

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