Can someone review and give feedback on my unpublished story

The first chapter isn’t done and their are mistakes that need to be corrected but how do you all think of it so far? its not finished meaning its PASS FREE and keep in mind ITS NOT finished so their still are errors but otherwise thanks! its called here comes trouble and its mostly comedy/romance (deals with abuse incase thats a trigger. my splash for that warning is still being reviewed)

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