I would like someone to review my story and give me some feedback on how to improve it.
Description:
Mora lives in a dystopian society where rules are everything. What will Mora do when her daughter is taken because she broke the rules? Can she get her daughter back?
you want to keep the privacy of your story.
plus if someone will read you story, you should wait till after you publish so reads couunt.
Of course you someone is beta reading they can read it before you publish but you shouldnt have alot of betas
also you never know of someone reads it an steals your story but published it before