Can someone review my story before I publish it?

Hi, can someone please review my story before I publish it! It’s my first story so I’m pretty nervous about it. I’ll make sure to give credit at the beginning of the story to anyone who decides to take a look at my story and give me feedback on the writing, the characters, and directing.

It’s only got three episodes at the moment. I’d also like thoughts on the story description! Also please tell me which love interest you pursue in your playthrough! Thanks!

Thank you!

The Depths of Newport
Romance and Mystery
Story description:
Forced into Witness Protection, Nadia moves to a small town on the east coast. Juggling love, friendship, and school, Nadia uncovers what lies beneath the depths of Newport.

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Yes I will! Do you want me to tell you any errors in it?

Yes please! Thank you!

Mhm, I will check it out and let you know.

I can though my rewiew is mostly just my opinion while I read. both good and bad

I’m fine with that! Thank you!

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I would love to

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