Hi! I am sorry to bother you guys but I would love to have someone review my story since it touches a lot of serious issues and I would love to hear insights to be sure I am depicting them in the right way.
I know it’s hard to talk about certain topics on episode and I really want minorities to be rightfully represented so pls pls pls if someone can review it it would be amazing.
Thanks either way.
My story title is “In Apnoea”!
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Hey sweets! I’d love to give a feedback! Also I’d recommend you changing the topic category to “Share feedback” so it doesn’t get flagged or something 
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I know I’ve reviewed it before but I’ll read your new episodes and let you know what I think!
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Moved to Share Feedback since you’re looking for proofreading. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about creating topics, and feel free to PM me if you’ve got questions. 
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