Can someone review my story my second story

Hi can anyone review my story called you are my sunshine LL i just want to know what you think of this story and any feedback or mistakes and errors let me know. Just the limelight version not ink.
Here’s cover
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I can if you’ll add a link

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Ok here’s link

Let me know your what you think.
Can you review my second story @JemU776 sorry if u didn’t wanna be tag

Hey @Faith.episode.cats thanks for the tag, I will try my best to check it out and let you know what I think :sparkling_heart:

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