Can someone review my story? Please:)

Hi, I am wanting to fix my story, but I need someone who can review my whole story (7 episodes).
Story : Tied Together
Author : Molly
Description : Sydney has everything she has ever wanted, but what happens when her Mafia life takes it all away?
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I can do that just visit my thread if you want Olu's review thread (OPEN)

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