Can someone review the first chapter of my story and tell me if I should continue?

Hello! I was wondering if someone could please read the first chapter of a new story I’m writing and tell me if I should continue lol. It’s a vampire story with 3 LI (only one seen in first ep). You can’t customize the LI yet because I’m going to add that later, and also the speech bubbles are weird rn. Thank you and I really appreciate it.

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Sure, I would love to read it what’s the name of your story? :heartpulse:

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Sure :blush:

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Thanks! I really appreciate it :smiley: It’s called Bloodlines but I haven’t published it yet because I want to know if I should even continue.

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Thank you so much! I really appreciate it :heart:

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oh ok, well I think you should definitely continue! :relaxed:

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Thank you!!! As long as one person likes it I will continue. Tysm again for reading it :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Anytime :heartpulse: :heartpulse:

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