Can someone take a look at my script there's an error

There’s an error in my script that I can’t find. I think I’m starring at it to long so I need fresh eyes lol

I missing a bracket or something I can’t tell: UNEXPECTED BLOCK END

choice
“Of course that’s my baby” {

INT. BLACK - DAY

    NARRATOR (HAZEL)
Nice choice 😏❤️

@transition fade out white 0.2

INT. BLUE DORM ROOM

@zoom on 320 332 to 197% in 0

@RYN spot 0.846 234 164 in zone 1 and RYN moves to layer 0 and ROMAN spot 0.884 105 145 in zone 1
@ROMAN moves to layer 0

@speechbubble is 125 203 to 81% with tail_top_right
RYN (talk_repulsed)
Apologize for what?

@speechbubble is 125 203 to 81% with tail_top_right
RYN (talk_doubtful)
I did nothing wrong

@zoom on 53 350 to 197% in 0.1

@speechbubble is 198 201 to 81% with tail_top_left
ROMAN (talk_sarcastic)
You snapped at me before I could tell you anything

@zoom on 320 375 to 197% in 0.1

@speechbubble is 125 203 to 81% with tail_top_right
RYN (talk_think_neutral)
So if I asked you what happened

@speechbubble is 125 203 to 81% with tail_top_right
RYN (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)
You would have told me everything?

&ROMAN is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop

@zoom on 53 378 to 197% in 0.1

@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 198 201 to 81% with tail_top_left
ROMAN (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)
I’m only trying to keep you safe kitten

@zoom on 320 375 to 197% in 0.1

@speechbubble is 125 203 to 81% with tail_top_right
RYN (talk_confused_mindblown)
Safe from what?!

@speechbubble is 125 203 to 81% with tail_top_right
RYN (talk_accuse_angry)
You always do this sh*t

@speechbubble is 125 203 to 81% with tail_top_right
RYN (talk_sad_exhausted)
Every time I try to get to know a just a little deeper

@speechbubble is 125 203 to 81% with tail_top_right
RYN (talk_armscrossed_sad_loop)
You shut down and shut me out

@speechbubble is 125 203 to 81% with tail_top_right
RYN (talk_armscrossed_sad_loop)
All I want is to get to know all of you

@speechbubble is 125 203 to 81% with tail_top_right
RYN (talk_armscrossed_sad_loop)
The bad and the ugly

@RYN is breathe_deep

@speechbubble is 125 203 to 81% with tail_top_right
RYN (talk_sad_timid_loop)
I cannot be in love with a stranger…

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 125 203 to 81% with tail_top_right
RYN (talk_startled_neutral)
Did I just say that out loud

@zoom on 53 361 to 197% in 0.1

@speechbubble is 198 201 to 81% with tail_top_left
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
| italic | you did

@zoom on 320 375 to 197% in 0.1

@RYN is idle_awkward_scratch_loop

@speechbubble is 125 203 to 81% with tail_top_right
RYN (talk_unsure)
Let’s just pretend that didn’t happen

&zoom on 286 375 to 155% in 2

@ROMAN walks to spot 0.872 158 155 in zone 1 in 2 and ROMAN moves to layer 0 and RYN is idle_armscrossed_awkward_loop

@ROMAN is breathe_deep

@speechbubble is 178 204 to 73% with tail_top_left
ROMAN (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
You love me?

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 125 203 to 81% with tail_top_right
RYN (talk_unsure)
Let’s just skip over that

@ROMAN walks to spot 0.878 171 155 in zone 1 in 3
@ROMAN moves to layer 0

@speechbubble is 178 204 to 74% with tail_top_left
ROMAN (talk_flirt_smile_lookdown)
I can’t just pretend you didn’t just say you loved me

@speechbubble is 125 203 to 81% with tail_top_right
RYN (talk_asif_angry)
Well you have to

@ROMAN is idle_happy_loop

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 125 203 to 81% with tail_top_right
RYN (talk_exhausted)
Your not going to let this go

@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 178 204 to 74% with tail_top_left
ROMAN (talk_flirt_charming)
You know what I love about you…

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 125 203 to 81% with tail_top_right
RYN (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)
How my as* look in jeans

@ROMAN is flirt_smile_lookaway

@speechbubble is 178 204 to 74% with tail_top_left
ROMAN (talk_shrug_neutral)
That too

&RYN is laugh_giggle

@RYN is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop

@speechbubble is 178 204 to 74% with tail_top_left
ROMAN (talk_cup_neutral)
I love how honest you are

@speechbubble is 178 204 to 74% with tail_top_left
ROMAN (talk_cup_neutral_loop)
You never second guess yourself…and although you’ve been through a lot

@speechbubble is 178 204 to 74% with tail_top_left
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
You wear it gracefully

&RYN is idle_armscrossed_awkward_loop

@speechbubble is 178 204 to 74% with tail_top_left
ROMAN (talk_cup_neutral)
You fight for the things you want

@speechbubble is 178 204 to 74% with tail_top_left
ROMAN (talk_cup_neutral)
You love hard and passionately

@ROMAN is breathe_deep

@speechbubble is 178 204 to 74% with tail_top_left
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
And I say this because

@speechbubble is 178 204 to 74% with tail_top_left
ROMAN (talk_sad_timid_loop)
I have been shutting you out and it’s not fair

@speechbubble is 178 204 to 74% with tail_top_left
ROMAN (talk_sad_timid_loop)
Your always open and honest with me…and you deserve the same

@ROMAN is breathe_deep

@speechbubble is 178 204 to 74% with tail_top_left
ROMAN (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
What I’m about to say is very hard to say

@speechbubble is 178 204 to 74% with tail_top_left
ROMAN (talk_armscrossed_sad_loop)
I have never told anyone about this that I couldn’t trust

@ROMAN is breathe_deep

@speechbubble is 178 204 to 74% with tail_top_left
ROMAN (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
We might need more drinks for this

@RYN is listen_nod_neutral_loop

@RYN is idle_happy_loop

@ROMAN is kiss_cheek_give and RYN is kiss_cheek_receive

@ROMAN walks to spot 0.878 35 139 in zone 1 in 3 and ROMAN moves to layer -1 and RYN walks to spot 0.846 48 162 in zone 1 in 5 and RYN moves to layer 0

@transition iris out

}

} “Stay single” {

INT. BLACK - NIGHT

    NARRATOR (HAZEL)
There's nothing wrong with wanting to be single like a dolla bill ...but that also means an brand new LI...but it will be the only one you get.
We have one episode left before the last and FINAL Season!
Thank so much for reading! ❤️😈💋💞

}

INT. BLACK - NIGHT

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 163 238 to 69%
NARR
Would you like to check out a bonus scene with Roman and Ryn?
You finally unveil the truth…:eyes:

choice (premiums)
GEMS:5"Umm…DUH :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:" {

INT. BLK WHITE DORM ROOM - NIGHT with UNDERWEAR to 0.562 120 116 in zone 2 with BRAAAAA to 1.000 297 -161 in zone 1 with HEELS to 0.687 248 -19 in zone 1 with BEER SPILL to 0.681 140 63 in zone 1 with SPILL BEER to 0.706 150 50 in zone 1
@zoom on 640 0 to 308% in 0
&cut to zone 2

@zoom on 640 0 to 159% in 3

@pan to zone 1

@transition fade out white 0.2

@ROMAN changes into roman_naked_bare
@RYN changes into ryn_naked
INT. DORM BED with BLANKET GUEST ROOM to 1.084 -4 -172 in zone 1
@zoom on 10 568 to 115% in 0

@ROMAN spot 1.255 85 13 in zone 1 and ROMAN moves to layer 0 and ROMAN faces left and RYN spot 1.213 96 13 in zone 1 and RYN moves to layer 0

@ROMAN is kiss_playful_loop and RYN is laugh_giggle

@RYN is laugh_giggle

@speechbubble is 210 233 to 70% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_flirt_charming)
That tickles

@ROMAN spot 1.255 180 12 in zone 1 and ROMAN moves to layer 0 and RYN spot 1.213 93 33 in zone 1 and RYN moves to layer 0 and RYN is kiss_makeout_start_rear and ROMAN is kiss_makeout_start

@pause for a beat

@ROMAN is kiss_makeout_loop and RYN is kiss_makeout_loop_rear

@pause for a beat

sound body_drop

@RYN faces left and RYN starts react_shocked_gasp and ROMAN is laugh_giggle

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_startled_neutral)
What was that?

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
That was your phone

@RYN is react_facepalm_disappointed

@RYN is idle_happy_loop

@RYN faces right and RYN spot 1.207 96 25 in zone 1 and RYN moves to layer 0

@RYN is breathe_deep

    ROMAN (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
Did it frighten you?

@RYN is eyeroll_subtle and ROMAN is laugh_giggle

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_flirt_charming)
So round 3?

@ROMAN is flirt_lookaway_bashful

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
As much as I would love to

@ROMAN is breathe_deep

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_unsure)
I should tell you what I’ve been avoiding …

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_neutral)
Okay I’m listening

@ROMAN is breathe_deep

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_exhausted)
I can’t believe I’m about to do this

@RYN is react_holdface_happy and ROMAN is think_rubchin

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_excited_happy)
Your proposing!

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_startled_neutral)
Umm…that’s not what this-

@RYN is laugh_crackup

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_flirt_smile_lookaway)
You should of seen your face

@ROMAN is laugh_chuckle

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_gossip)
That was pretty good

@pause for a beat

@ROMAN is breathe_deep and RYN is idle_happy_loop

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_armscrossed_sad_loop)
You were right about some things…

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_armscrossed_sad_loop)
Please try to understand…the only reason I didn’t tell you was to protect you

@ROMAN is breathe_deep

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_exhausted)
I am a Mafia Leader

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_startled_neutral)
Oh my gods.

@RYN is idle_armscrossed_awkward_loop and ROMAN is breathe_deep

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_unsure)
I guess you can say I’m in training…

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_armscrossed_sad_loop)
So every first born of every generation in my Family

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_armscrossed_sad_loop)
My great grandfather…then my grandfather and now my father

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_sad_serious_loop)
And then me

@ROMAN is idle_sad_serious_loop

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_exhausted)
I don’t even know what to say

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_unsure)
What…about your friends?!

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)
Do they know about this

@ROMAN is laugh_giggle

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_unsure)
What’s so funny?

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
As if I’d be able to keep this from them

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
Alyeze is my second in command

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_startled_neutral)
How…why?

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
Alyeze and Josephanie parents work for me

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral_loop)
It’s some agreement between their grandparents… my grandfather was their guardians

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
They eventually became apart of all of this

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_think_neutral)
What about your roommate?

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
It’s better she doesn’t know

@RYN is breathe_deep

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_unsure)
So you mean your first born child would have to become the leader?

@ROMAN is listen_nod_neutral_loop and RYN is breathe_deep

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_neutral)
What if you don’t bear any children?

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
I have to birth an | italic |heir

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_startled_neutral)
I wouldn’t say you have to

    RYN (talk_apathetic)
It's should be a women choice

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_exhausted)
Unfortunately in this world, you don’t

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_doubtful)
This is sh*t

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
I know

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
I’ve had a lot of time to process it

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
I have been preparing for this literally my whole life

@RYN is breathe_deep

@RYN is idle_armscrossed_awkward_loop

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
Promise me you won’t speak these words to anyone else

@RYN is breathe_deep

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
Ryn…

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_exhausted)
Well I need to at least talk to Jordi about it

@ROMAN is breathe_deep

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral_loop)
It’s no secret that Mafia Families exist…literally all over the world

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral_loop)
My Father chooses to keep a low profile…so the repercussions are

    ROMAN (talk_neutral)
| animation:shuffle-sideways, bold |Death

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_startled_neutral)
You’d actually kill me if I told?

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
I’d never let anything happen to you kitten

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
But I don’t have much control over the Family as of yet

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
My Father does

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_neutral)
And he’ll kill me without hesitation

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
Let’s change the topic

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_exhausted)
This is a lot to process

@pause for a beat

@ROMAN is breathe_deep

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_exhausted)
I know

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
But I want you to know I understand this is a lot do I would never pressure you into anything

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
This isn’t something you signed up for and I understand if it’s to much

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_armscrossed_sad_loop)
When would you officially become the leader?

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
When I get married

@pause for a beat

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
Oh okay you have a little time before that happens, right?

@pause for a beat

@ROMAN is breathe_deep

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
After I graduate

@RYN is react_facepalm_disappointed

@speechbubble is 163 250 to 68% with tail_top_left
RYN (talk_sarcastic)
Let’s see if you don’t…you can’t become the leader

@pause for a beat

    ROMAN (talk_unsure)
Well...not exactly




    ROMAN (talk_exhausted)
My Father would have to choose my wife...

@pause for a beat

@RYN is idle_armscrossed_awkward_loop

sound phone_vibrate

@pause for a beat

@ROMAN is dustoff_neutral_loop

@ROMAN is read_phone_neutral_loop

    ROMAN (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
Jo just got engaged

@speechbubble is 145 244 to 68% with tail_top_right
ROMAN (talk_neutral)
I will be right back

@ROMAN is kiss_cheek_give

@ROMAN walks to spot 1.255 336 3 in zone 1 in 3

@ROMAN is kiss_cheek_give

@zoom on 19 461 to 170% in 2

@transition fade out white 0.2

}

INT. BLACK - NIGHT

    NARRATOR (HAZEL)
Thank so much for reading! ❤️😈💋💞






    NARRATOR
Would you like to support the author?

choice (support_authorszz)
GEMS:5 “Absolutely! 5 Gems for you!” {
NARRATOR
You are amazing! Thank you for your support!

}GEMS:8"Absolutely! 8 Gems for you!"{
NARRATOR
You are amazing! Thank you for your support!

} GEMS:12 “Absolutely! 12 Gems for you!” {
NARRATOR
You are amazing! Thank you for your support!

} “No, thank you.” {
NARRATOR
No worries! Thank you for reading!

}

The issue is you have an extra bracket after the transition and before }“Stay single” {

Issue

@transition iris out
}
}“Stay single” {

INT. BLACK - NIGHT

Correct brackets

@transition iris out
}“Stay single” {

INT. BLACK - NIGHT

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