Can someone tell me how to correct this?

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Hm, well for me it usually does. :woman_shrugging:

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Can I send u script with dailouge… Can you check it whether it is working well with dailouges… I m confused atm

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The dialogues will still be depending on readers tapp ´on my reading speed - as explained above

  • but of course I can check it with my reading speed if it fits if you want

have you tested what I have send you?

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Not yet… It’s too confusing that I can’t find what you have changed

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I pan in 12 while he walks in 15 that makes is nice smooth pan till he exits the scene and I deleted the second walking command that was conflicting the script.

I also little bit adjusted the start just to simplyfy the coding

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just copy it in your script and test it then you will see what is going on.

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Also just a note - in my opinion it would look better if he would enter the scene instead of being there from start - but this is just my opinion you of course can keep it that he walks the corridor right from the start.

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He is walking from the starting…
And also I copied the script, but it didn’t work well. Firstly the charac. from zone 1 didn’t appear while panning, and Bonnie appeared in zone 2, and she was on totally wrong spot
then the Mc reached 3rd zone and dialogue started…that was not looking good.

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pls what do you mean that the characts in zone 1 do not apear while panning - since all the characters are on their spots from start

Yeah, I accidentaly as it seems deleted Bonnies spotting

To have the dialogue happening while the pan just change the

@pan to zone 1 in 12

to

&pan to zone 1 in 12

like this

INT. BLUE SCHOOL HALLWAY - DAY
&ZOYA spot 0.848 164 209 in zone 1 at layer 1 AND ZOYA faces left AND ZOYA is listen_nod_happy_loop
&SHIA spot 0.794 83 231 in zone 1 at layer 1 AND SHIA faces right AND SHIA is talk_handraised_happy_loop
&MAXIM spot 0.902 42 188 in zone 2 at layer 0 AND MAXIM faces right AND MAXIM is read_phone_neutral_loop
&IMA spot 0.839 125 198 in zone 2 at layer 1 AND IMA is talk_armscrossed_angry_loop
&MASON spot 0.884 283 196 in zone 2 at layer 0 AND MASON faces right AND MASON is talk_phone_sad_loop
&ADDY spot 0.965 93 173 in zone 3 at layer 0 AND ADDY faces right AND ADDY is talk_neutral_loop
&BEE spot 0.920 242 183 in zone 3 at layer 0 AND BEE is talk_sarcastic
&BONNIE spot 0.929 169 182 in zone 3 at layer 0 AND BONNIE faces left AND BONNIE is listen_nod_happy_loop
&LUCIFER spot 1.154 319 99 in zone 3 at layer 4
@cut to zone 3
@pause for 1
&ZOYA faces right AND ZOYA is admire_happy AND MAXIM is idle_awkward_uneasy_loop AND IMA faces right AND IMA is blush_shy AND ADDY is idle_jawdrop_awe_loop AND BEE is flirt_fingerbite_sexy AND BONNIE faces right AND BONNIE is react_holdface_happy
&LUCIFER walks to spot 1.280 -80 6 in zone 1 in 15
&pan to zone 1 in 12

    NARR (LUCIFER)
Dialogue...
    NARR (LUCIFER)
Dialogue...

    NARR (LUCIFER)
Dialogue...

    NARR (LUCIFER)
Dialogue...

    NARR (LUCIFER)
Dialogue...

    NARR (LUCIFER)
Dialogue.....

&ZOYA faces left
@transition iris out in 2

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Sorry if I offended you… I didn’t mean to… I was just saying that it was not working well…

Thankyou I’ll try this one too :two_hearts:

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I am not offended :grinning_face_with_smiling_eyes: I just don’t understand what you mean by that the character does not appear in zone 1 - I see them all.

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Ohh that’s okay then… I thought I might have said something in wrong way.
I mean that the characters were there but they didnt show in screen as the Mc walked from left side of the zone 3… I mean he didn’t walk from starting…

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English is not my native language so I am not sure if I get it right, :sweat_smile:

  • so you want it to state in zone 1 and then cut to zone 3 after a while?

In my portal scene starts in zone 3 and the scene starts with him walking from the right side of zone 3 to zone 1 and then out of the screen to the left…while he walks he passes all the characters including the one in zone 1. :thinking:

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oh I mistakely said wrong.
Its zone 3 to zone 1
I corrected it above

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lol I am more and more confused from your description of the problem - :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

What I see is this below - please correct which point you don’t want there:

  1. scene starts in zone 3
  2. All characters do an animation for a second
  3. he is in zone 3 on RIGHT side
  4. then after a second he starts to walk and the other change animation - they react on seeing him
  5. the dialogue appears
  6. he walks to zone 1 and camera follows till he exits zone 1 on the left side
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Forget it… Its not much of issue… I’ll try this script and tell u how it goes :blush::two_hearts:

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