Can someone tell me if this is too much?

-Not important; Hey, so I haven’t wrote a story since 2018, I thought it would be fun to do so again.
I am recreating my first ever story one episode from scratch, which is a story of a witch and a curse, Blah, blah, blah.

-Important!; Anyways! The story starts off as like a flashback…? I guess you could say? the witch is at a cliff moments before she is pushed off to her death, which that part is shown. I want to know if that’s to much? should I take that part out? is bad if I show her getting pushed off? or is it okay?

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Well personally, I don’t think that showing her getting pushes off is too much but just in case you can add flash in between the scene or you could add a transition.