Can someone tell me what to do to fix this?

INT. BEDROOM DAY - SHARA.STORIES
&zoom on 796 315 to 248% in 0 AND cut to zone 3
&WILL BROWN spot 0.767 49 193 in zone 1 AND WILL BROWN faces right AND WILL BROWN is tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear AND WILL BROWN moves to layer 2
@WILL BROWN changes into Will 3
&HENNY spot 0.929 158 136 in zone 3 AND HENNY faces left AND HENNY is deepbreath AND HENNY moves to layer 1
@HENNY changes into Henny 1
@transition fade in white in 2
@pause for 1

    HENNY (talk_unsure)
Can we talk?

if (Fixornot is “Try to fix things”) {

@pause for 0.3 THEN cut to zone 1 AND zoom on 0 258 to 299% in 0
@pause for 0.7
@WILL BROWN is dustoff_neutral_loop THEN pause for 1
@speechbubble is 216 280 to 88% with tail_top_left

    WILL BROWN (talk_think_neutral)
About what?

@pause for 0.3 THEN cut to zone 3 AND zoom on 796 315 to 248% in 0
@speechbubble is 214 240 to 88% with tail_top_left

    HENNY (talk_awkward_loop)
About us.

    HENNY (talk_exhausted)
I want things to go back to normal again, Will.

@pause for 0.3 THEN cut to zone 1 AND zoom on 0 258 to 299% in 0
@speechbubble is 216 280 to 88% with tail_top_left

    WILL BROWN (talk_shrug_neutral)
Have you talked to Olivia?

@pause for 0.3 THEN cut to zone 3 AND zoom on 796 315 to 248% in 0
@speechbubble is 214 240 to 88% with tail_top_left

    HENNY (talk_sad)
I haven't, but I want to-

    HENNY (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
You believe me, right?

@pause for 0.3 THEN cut to zone 1 AND zoom on 0 258 to 299% in 0
@speechbubble is 216 280 to 88% with tail_top_left
@WILL BROWN is deepbreath THEN pause for 1

    WILL BROWN (talk_neutral)
I'm sorry, but I don't have anything to say to you before you have talked to her-

    WILL BROWN (talk_shrug_neutral)
If you aren't serious about this, then let's get a divorce.

@pause for 0.3 THEN cut to zone 3 AND zoom on 796 315 to 248% in 0
@speechbubble is 214 240 to 88% with tail_top_left

    HENNY (talk_startled_neutral)
What? No!

    HENNY (talk_unsure)
I mean, I will talk to her.

@pause for 0.3 THEN cut to zone 1 AND zoom on 0 258 to 299% in 0
@speechbubble is 216 280 to 88% with tail_top_left

    WILL BROWN (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
I will believe it when I see it.

    WILL BROWN (talk_think_neutral)
If you will excuse me, I have to get ready for a meeting with Jack now.

@pause for 0.3 THEN cut to zone 3 AND zoom on 796 315 to 248% in 0
@speechbubble is 214 240 to 88% with tail_top_left

    HENNY (talk_sad)
Of course.

&HENNY walks to spot 0.929 307 129 in zone 3 in 2 AND HENNY does it while walk_sad_loop
@pause for 1 THEN cut to zone 1 AND zoom on 0 258 to 299% in 0
&WILL BROWN is deepbreath
@speechbubble reset

    NARRATOR (WILL BROWN)
It's not because I don't love Henny anymore, it's the fact that she could even bring herself to do this to Olivia and I.
I won't stay with her if she can't accept Olivia as my daughter, I love both my daughters-

    NARRATOR (WILL BROWN)
I have made mistakes in the past, and I have to fight to get a relationship with Olivia again, but I will do anything even if it means I have to leave Henny.

&WILL BROWN is idle_sad_loop

    NARRATOR (WILL BROWN)
My daughters mean everything to me, and I don't want to lose any of them.

} else { (Fixornot is “Don’t try to fix things”)

@pause for 0.3 THEN cut to zone 1 AND zoom on 0 258 to 299% in 0
@pause for 0.7
@WILL BROWN is dustoff_neutral_loop THEN pause for 1
@speechbubble is 216 280 to 88% with tail_top_left

    WILL BROWN (talk_think_neutral)
About what?

@pause for 0.3 THEN cut to zone 3 AND zoom on 796 315 to 248% in 0
@speechbubble is 214 240 to 88% with tail_top_left

    HENNY (talk_awkward_loop)
About us.

    HENNY (talk_exhausted)
I want things to go back to normal again, Will.

@pause for 0.3 THEN cut to zone 1 AND zoom on 0 258 to 299% in 0
@speechbubble is 216 280 to 88% with tail_top_left

    WILL BROWN (talk_doubtful)
I can't stay with someone who could kill my daughter, what if it was Jamie?

@pause for 0.3 THEN cut to zone 3 AND zoom on 796 315 to 248% in 0
@speechbubble is 214 240 to 88% with tail_top_left

    HENNY (talk_shrug_neutral)
I would be furious, I would-

@pause for 0.3 THEN cut to zone 1 AND zoom on 0 258 to 299% in 0
@speechbubble is 216 280 to 88% with tail_top_left

    WILL BROWN (talk_think_neutral)
Would you stay married to the person?

@pause for 0.3 THEN cut to zone 3 AND zoom on 796 315 to 248% in 0
@speechbubble is 214 240 to 88% with tail_top_left

    HENNY (talk_deny_neutral)
Of course not!

    HENNY (talk_neutral)
It would make me even more furious.

    HENNY (talk_unsure)
Why are you asking me this?

@pause for 0.3 THEN cut to zone 1 AND zoom on 0 258 to 299% in 0
@speechbubble is 216 280 to 88% with tail_top_left

    WILL BROWN (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)
That's how I feel every time I look at you, I never wanted our relationship to end like this-

    WILL BROWN (talk_neutral)
But I can't even look at you without getting angry.

@pause for 0.3 THEN cut to zone 3 AND zoom on 796 315 to 248% in 0
@speechbubble is 214 240 to 88% with tail_top_left

    HENNY (talk_startled_neutral)
Wait, are you leaving me because of what I did to Olivia?!

@pause for 0.3 THEN cut to zone 1 AND zoom on 0 258 to 299% in 0
@speechbubble is 216 280 to 88% with tail_top_left

    WILL BROWN (talk_sad)
I'm sorry it had to come to this, Henny.

@WILL BROWN is deepbreath THEN pause for 0.8
&HENNY is scream_angry

    WILL BROWN (talk_neutral)
Olivia and I will move out today.

&WILL BROWN walks to spot 0.767 -59 189 in zone 1 in 2 AND WILL BROWN does it while walk_sad_loop
@pause for 1 THEN cut to zone 3 AND zoom on 796 315 to 248% in 0
@pause for 3

}

Can you say what the issue is?

I’ve read your help post for if/else/elif, there are spaces in the gains, could that be the problem?

What is the error(s) or warning(s) ? :thinking:

She isn’t using gains though.

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Remove what I bolded. It should just be:

} else {

if (Fixornot is “Try to fix things”) {

I thought this was a gain, lol. I still don’t understand all this stuff I guess. :smiley:

oh

She’s using the “choice name and option” method for remembering choices. You can read about that method here: Using if/elif/else to Remember Past Choices

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Thanks. :slight_smile: <3

Thanks, it worked! :heart_eyes::two_hearts:

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