Can someone tell me whats wrong with my script?

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ACTRESS (talk_sad_serious_loop)
I LOVE YOU JAMES.
ACTOR (talk_armraised_sad)
You wouldn’t love me after i show you who i really am.
@ACTOR is showfangs_armsdown_threatening AND ACTRESS is idle_sad_timid_loop
@zoom on 568 304 to 1603% in 0
@ACTOR changes mouth into Medium Heart Vampire Fangs
@ACTOR changes hairColor into Platinum Ice
@ACTOR changes eyeColor into Red
@ACTOR is idle_sad_loop
@zoom on 568 294 to 485% in 3
ACTOR (talk_sad_timid_loop)
What i’m going to say it’s probably the most selfish thing i’ve ever said…
But I LOVE YOU TOO EVIE WINTERS.
I’VE ALWAYS LOVED YOU.
@remove ACTOR

It says @ACTOR changes eyeColor into Red is not a valid direction comand.

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@ACTOR changes eyesColor into Red

Try that^

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it worked but now i’ve another prob.

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@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 4
readerMessage Choose wisely ;D (lol)
LEAH (talk_handsonhips_neutral_rear)
THAT WAS SAD!!!
choice “I’ll still watch it.” {
LEAH (talk_neutral_loop_rear)
I’ll still watch it anyway.
@zoom on 568 294 to 485% in 5
ACTRESS (talk_angry)
I’ll find him.
@ACTRESS walks to spot 0.191 275 459 in zone 2 in 3 AND ACTRESS is run_athletic_neutral_loop
INT.KUABEDROOM-NIGHT with TV ROOM with COUCH
@cut to zone 3
@overlay 5671334853214208_TV ROOM shifts to 48 -4 in zone 1
@overlay 5671334853214208_TV ROOM scales to 2.332 2.332
@overlay TV ROOM moves to layer 10
@overlay 5671334853214208_COUCH shifts to 79 -4 in zone 1
@overlay 5671334853214208_COUCH scales to 2.152 2.152
@overlay 5671334853214208_COUCH moves to layer 15
@ACTOR stands screen center AND ACTOR faces left AND ACTOR moves to layer -50
} “Watch another drama.” {

} “Go to sleep” {

}

@Jenaco i can’t preview the scene in the choice.

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what is it

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You could try
INT. KUABEDROOM
(with a space)

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i did but it still didn’t help

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should i use if/ else?

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you can try

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okay

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Wait nvm I read that wrong, which scene can’t you preview? The first one?

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from here

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does it pop up as an error? or you just can’t see it? because maybe you just need to reset the choices you made by restarting the chapter…

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Maybe refresh your page?

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let me try

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i used point system i worked fine but after adding zoom
it gives another error.

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You forgot to add the “@“ or “&” on line 276.

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Ohhh I’m sorry I didn’t see that

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help anyone?

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The command is:

@CHARACTER stands screen center