Can you guys check out my story!

Okay so I’m super self conciou about everything that I do.
I am not sure if my story will be good or not.
Or if it sucks if I should continue writing it or not ?
It’s called
Playing Dangerous.
I need positive and not so positive comments !
I need to know if there is something I am not doing enough or something that could help my story !
I’m willing to help others !!
Thank you so much

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