Can you please leave feedback for me on my story?

It is called The Testeds’ Pasts, i would like construcive critisim. Know how to make improvments. C:

The Testeds’ Pasts

Follow Elizaveta Kozlov’s story as she’s become a hero, despite her troubled childhood. Something her father, the evil Osbert Ali, has never done.

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