Can you review my new published story?

Hey! I just published my first story called forlorn spirits. Id very much like if someone review my story I really need an honest opinion about everything and especially the characters. WHAT you think that one is up to and stuff. Id mean the world to me honestly. :heart:
Here’s the link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5222912631308288

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Hey… Are you interested in r4r? :))