Hey so i’m a new writer and i have a slight problem with my storycoding. I have multiple characters walking and they are covering one another if that makes sense. Like they aren’t walking in a line. Any tips to fix this?
Script below:
INT. BLUE SCHOOL HALLWAY LOCKERS - DAY
@pan to zone 1
@AMBER moves to layer 1 (walk_neutral_loop)
AMBER
Did you bring your perfume? I left mine in the car.
@AUDREY moves to layer 2 (walk_neutral_loop)
AUDREY
Yea I got it-
AVA (walk_neutral)
Oh my!
@pan to zone 3
PENELOPE (think_rubchin)
So this is the school
@cut to zone 1
@zoom on AUDREY to 200% in 0
AUDREY (react_shocked_gasp)
Who is that!
@zoom reset
@pan to zone 3
PENELOPE (idle_happy_loop)
Time for a fresh start i guess
You could do @CHARACTER walks to spot xyz in 0.5 @CHARACTER walks to spot xyz in 1.5 @CHARACTER walks to spot xyz in 2.5
Or were you not doing spot directing?
Sorry if this doesn’t work how you want, I didn’t test it out on my laptop
Wait, I don’t really understand what you out above, when the two girls stop to talk about the perfume, do the others keep going, or are they all together so they all stop?