Check out my story, Crossed Paths! ❤

Hi,

Please check out my story Crossed Paths! This is a revamp of the previous version I had made.

Sorry I am not planning to do read for reads! I want my story to be read because you want to read it, not because you have to read it!

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What I changed:

  • More advanced directing
  • Improved dialogue and thickening the storyline
  • Given the characters more personality and backstories
  • Derek is not a bad boy, rather he is a good and patient man
  • Mindy has gone through some tough stuff
  • Made sure the overall story is smoother

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5294643993772032

I’d really appreciate it if you took the time to check my story out - I am hoping it is 100 reads material haha so if you guys have anything tp suggest like changing my description, or anything like that.

Hope at least one of you are interested, haha.

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Sure!

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Yippee, thank you!! :heart:

Let me know what you think of it after reading :sparkles:

do you want a read 4 read with me ?

Name story: Amazing Inside
Genre: Fantasty
Chapters: will be continue.
Description: Can Emma control her emotion when she realize they come out and talk to her!! Can she balance love, family and friendship before a mystery power come and destroy everything.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5843577419464704 1

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Hello, we could do a read for read if you want ? :slight_smile:

But first : For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form

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Here is the description of my story :

Title : Paradise
Author : Maggy

Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 10 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : A young adult called Fidelia is about to become a Goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong and independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her faith?

Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4807228412788736

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Aaaah I saw! Thanks so much for using the splash I made you!

Feel free to come to me anytime you need art for your story! I’d love to create a new cover or anything if you want :kissing_heart:

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Ah thank you for reading and everyone reviewing was saying how nice the splashes were!!!

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Ahh :joy::blush:

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Hi I will be reviewing your story soon :slight_smile:

Sure :slight_smile:

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Btw could I read your other story please, Jungle Fever? It sounds really good!