Please check out my story Crossed Paths! This is a revamp of the previous version I had made.
Sorry I am not planning to do read for reads! I want my story to be read because you want to read it, not because you have to read it!
What I changed:
- More advanced directing
- Improved dialogue and thickening the storyline
- Given the characters more personality and backstories
- Derek is not a bad boy, rather he is a good and patient man
- Mindy has gone through some tough stuff
- Made sure the overall story is smoother
I’d really appreciate it if you took the time to check my story out - I am hoping it is 100 reads material haha so if you guys have anything tp suggest like changing my description, or anything like that.
Hope at least one of you are interested, haha.