Check out my story, Lapis! For fantasy lovers!


#1

So I as well as most episode users are getting sick and tired of the fantasy stories like OMG, I’m getting engaged with a HOT WEREWOLF or OMG, I got impregnated by a VAMPIRE
So I made I story that you won’t find from anyone else. Sure the storyline might wobble a bit, BUT this IS my first time making an Episode. All you have to do is search 'Lapis and look for the story with a sand time thumbnail. (Still waiting on approval for my picture) Anyway please, please, please! Give it a look.


#2

Hey! My name is Dani! :black_heart:

If you want, I can review your story and post the review on my Instagram (daniepisodewriter).

The review will be focus on:

Plot/Originality
Directing
Language/Grammar (I can’t say much about grammar and language because English is not my first language, but if I spot any mistakes I’ll tell you.)
Overall opinion

:warning: The review will be as many episodes as you have read of my story. :warning:
Per example: If you read 3 episodes of my story, I’ll review the first 3 episodes of your story.
Maximum: 4 episodes

Here’s my story:
Title: Darkness
Author: Dani
Genre: Romance/Mystery
Style: Ink
Description: If you can’t get away from darkness, you learn to live with it… A vampire story with action, adventure, mystery and, of course, romance!
This is not a cliche vampire story!
Episodes: 8 (more to come)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5439290271858688
Instagram: daniepisodewriter
I hope you like it :black_heart:

Any other person who wants a review can send me their story too! :blush::black_heart:

Tell me if you want me to do the review! :calling:


#3

I would love for you to do a review, be as brutal as you want. I’m a first time writer and I went in with no script… which I realise now is a BIG mistake.


#4

Great! Can you please fill out the form on my instagram bio? :blush:
That’s pretty normal because I bet you were very excited to publish a story and you didn’t even think much about the script.
But it’s never too late to write one!


#5

I’ve just finished it now!


#6

Okay thanks!


#7

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile:


#8