If you want your story reviewed by Cherii, please keep reading (:
Hello everyone! So I love reviewing stories for some reason. I like the idea of helping people fix their mistakes & it even helps me (sometimes, lol) as well.
Basically what I’m trying to say is I want to review some stories. I do have an Instagram group for story review (Helping Epi Community (@helpingepicommunity) • Instagram photos and videos) but I do want to review some stories here in the forums!
DISCLAIMER:
I will be giving my honest thoughts. It’s not meant to hurt or ridicule you! I only want to help the best way I can.
I will only review 3 chapters. If I enjoyed reading your story, I’ll continue reading on my own interest (:
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So… if you want a review, fill this forum: Author: Genre: Summary: Cover: Style: Link:
Additional Information:
I’ll be posting the stories that I loved reading on Instagram Follow Here So it’s not mandatory but I’ll love it if you follow the page (so more people could see your story too
If this flops… that’s fine because I do have the Instagram group but hopefully it doesn’t.
Thank you for doing this! It’s my first time publishing a story and I need all the help here Author:@KanaMoon Genre: Comedy
**Summary:**Life is hell for you and you know who to blame, your Ex! With a bit of creativity and the help of your friends, you go on an adventure to get your revenge! Cover:
Hello, thank you for doing this.
This is my first story and I need a little bit of help and am free to any sort of criticism Author: Ekaterine Genre: Romance Summary: One night together is all it takes for the two love birds to never forget about each other. What happens when 2 years later they meet again ? Style: Limelight Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5794948892524544
Thank you for this! This is my story, I’d love a review
Title: The Fixer Genre: Drama/Romance Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5771622302416896 Instagram:@dynastywrites Description: Power, money and influence. This successful Hollywood fixer has the perfect life. But when someone from her past comes back for a favor, everything is about to change. Extras: Full CC for MC and LIs + 2 LIs + Point System + Choices Matter
Author: Hazel J Genre: Sci-fi/Mystery Summary: With the increasing cases of missing people in the metropolis, you can trust no one. But can you trust a mysterious non-entity whom for all the while you thought is a human? Cover:
thankyou so much for doing it!!
I have 2 stories, hope you like them.
Author- Tessa
Genre- Romance
Description- What will happen when Cloe accidently meet her soulmate through her gamer heart? Without seeing each other will they be able to love? CC, choices matter, art scenes
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Author- Tessa
Genre- Drama
Summary- Lyle lost her memory while saving another person and her bravery turns the spotlight onto her…Little does she know, there’s someone watching her from the shadow.
CC,2 endings,1LI
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When Joesph and the MC came to see what Selena was about to show them, they came one at a time. You should let Joesph and the MC to come at once: @JOESPH enters from left to screen left AND MC enters from left to screen center
At the beginning (Chapter 1), you keep saying that the story will get better as you keep reading. You don’t need to say that- the readers shouldn’t know that the story is “bad” if you know what I mean. By saying that the story will get better as you keep reading, might tick my readers off. Chapter 1 of any story should be the attention grabber. If the readers didn’t enjoy reading chapter 1, they’ll most likely click off your story.
In Chapter Two, I chose the black dress so I could go to the club but in chapter three, I wore a completely different dress. You should use Dara’s dressing game with flags tutorial, so when readers pick a black dress in chapter two, they could still be able to remember their choice in future chapters! Click!
I see the hard work in your story and your story really does have great potential! They’re just some errors that you could fix to make it better! I hope you liked this review and wish you and your stories well
Author: vidu Genre: Drama/Romance Summary: Aubrey thinks she has it all worked out until, a smoking hot architect enters her office and things get far too complicated and tempting. Cover:
Author : Ann C Genre : Romance Summary : When you break up for the nth time, you decide to have fun. How will you maintain your ‘fun girl’ reputation at school while being a good girl at home? Cover :
You need to look back & correct when layering your characters. One character is blocking the other character & the character’s layering looks so messy.
Sometimes characters are sitting down in one position (or standing) then automatically is in a laying down position. You should make the transition to a position. For example, if the character is initially standing, they should walk to the bed & lies down. Maybe do the jump animation so it can look like they were jumping to the bed to lie down. When the characters aren’t transitioning through positions, it looks messy & very robotic.
I can tell you worked very hard on your story. However, I think that the biggest mistake you frequently make is the directing/ spotting. Try to make your characters be correctly layered (not on top of each other). Make sure you frequently move the speech bubbles to a good position when needed. (Good position means the speech bubble is pointing to the character or their month). Make sure you use & when spotting characters to their positions instead of @, so that the characters don’t pop up randomly. Good luck with your story & hope you enjoy this review
Thanks so much for this cherii! This is my first story so please let me know all that needs work
Name: Toxicity
Genre: Romance,Drama
Author : Halima
Story description : you’re a regular quiet girl who happens to overhear an indispensable phone conversation with a feared mob boss. They say curiosity kills the cat, but will it kill you? CC + LL
Style: Limelight