When characters are finished talking, their lips is still moving or when they’re rear positions, they’re still moving side to side (because they neutral_talk_rear, something like that). Make sure they’re in idle or idle_rear when they are suppose to finish talking.
I enjoyed reading. Ngl, chapter one was a bit boring but the story become interesting in chapter two or three . it was still fun to read. Good luck on the contest & I hope you enjoyed this review.
Thank you, I’d love it if you reviewed my story Author:@stargirl4 Genre: Drama Summary: Everything about him was grey, like the smoke he exhaled. His hair, his eyes, his smoke,
his anger, his aptitude, his dreams. Cover:
The MC looks tiny. She looks like she’s in the backseat instead of in the front. The male looks a bit big. Increase the MC size a bit and lower the male size just a tad (:
Use & to spot the characters and the overlay car. When you used @ to spot the characters and the vehicle, it took a huge pause in zone 1 before coming to zone 2 and showing them. Same thing happened to this scene:
It took a huge pause before showing us the character and the background because you used @ instead of & to spot the characters
Whenever you’re using transitions, it transitions but still appears in the same background before going to the next instead of transitioning to the next background. It’s possible you’re using @transition fade out when you’re supposed to do @transition fade in and vice versa.
I really like your story, for real. I will continue like one or two chapters more. But the grammar errors kinda tick me off. I’ll suggest that you should get a proofreader before publishing so they can correct the mistakes you missed or didn’t even know they’re mistakes. I also suggest that you should get a beta-reader so they can show and tell you how to fix your directing mistakes and your storytelling! Thank you for requesting for a review. Good luck on your writing <3
Author: Yoshi Genre: Sci-Fi Summary: One party is all it takes for you to receive your second life. A life in which you are the hero. In your “normal” life you cheering “From the Sidelines.” Cover:
You’ve got quite the reputation in your city, but what happens when your soulmate is the biggest baddie in the whole country.Who gets to dominate and rule the game?[CHOICES MATTER]
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The story is a comedy that deals with Rac*sm, classism, body image issues, bullying and results of peer pressure etc. - later episodes [TW]
Hey I would love to hear your reviews regarding my newly published story…SINISTER LOVE
Author- Mikasa and Panda
Genre- Thriller
Summary- A rich and frivolous boy suddenly discovers his dark side… What impact will it have on others? Can anyone survive his murderous clutches or will everyone fall prey?
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Author: Starz
Genre: Action and Sci-fi
Summary: In a dystopian world where people with superpowers are seen are more superior to humans, you’re given an opportunity to create a life worth living. Will you prevail? And find love?
Style : ink
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6288588278530048
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Is a Fantasy and Romance story
Is in INK and Limelight Author: Julina Star
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A small summary of it: Sabrina live a normal life, until she meet Antonio. Old enemies are coming back, will her life change for the better or worse, follow her journey filled with lies, drama and romance Link to my story:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4630420235550720
This is my story and I hope you’ll give it a chance hehe
Title: What Women Want Description: You left what you used to do to forget your tragic past. But, what if one day the one you left behind needed you back? Would you come back? [F MC/F LI/LIM CC/LGBTQ/MINI GAMES] Genre: LGBTQ+, Action, & Romance Author: Emerald No. of Episodes: Four Instagram: @emerald.epi Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5661398687481856
Author: CassieC Genre: Drama Summary: Welcome to the World’s Most Eligible Daredevil Reality Show, where contestants must compete to win 1 Million dollars doing dangerous dares and challenges. Will you come out on top? Cover:
Hope you have a chance to review my new story! I could really use some help with feedback and critiques.
Lost In The Stars
Author: Mare Acacia Genre: Adventure Summary: When shipwreck leaves you lost at sea with a band of pirates will you use the stars to navigate? With a nutty king on your tail and treasure on the map this sea is full of secrets. Cover:
Hi! I hope that you can review my story when you get a chance to! I’m open to both positive and negative feedback so please don’t hold back if there’s something you don’t like :).
The directing is AMAZING! I loved everything about the directing throughout the whole story.
I love every adventure aspect throughout the story.
The minigames were unique & fun to complete’
The Ugly
Throughout the whole story, only the MC was in the idle animation. I tried to click the story out, restart the app, & even delete the app and get it back but the MC still stayed in that position.
Thank you so much! I’m not exactly sure what happened with your character but I’ll look into it for sure. I’m so glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the review!
Name: Flash (complete) Author: Hxxd → @hx.episode Genre: Mystery Style: INK Chapters: 3 Status: Complete Description: You see a chain of events, but who do they belong to, and what do they mean? You’re out on a mission in search for vengeance, will you find what you’re looking for? Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5778327886692352 Cover:
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Title: What Women Want
