Hi there! Thank you for doing this! Here’s my story.
Author: liawrites Genre: LGBTQ+ Summary: It’s 1948. Daphne, an aspiring actress, risks a secret affair with the CEO of Jupiter Studios for stardom. Things take a turn when she falls for his wife, Evelyn Neptune, on set. Cover:
Title: Treasure In You Author: L.Q. Walter Instagram: @lqwalter.episode Genre: Adventure/Romance Chapters: 10 (more coming soon) Style: Limelight Description: After discovering an old diary she believes will lead her to the location of a long lost treasure, she teams with an unlikely ally: a guy who is downright cocky yet wickedly hot! Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5342141547216896 Cover:
Author: Mia Genre: Romance/drama/action lol Summary: Raven was always feared and envied…that was until she started working for the ruthless Blaze monroe. With a mysterious past, a new romance and dangers will she make it out alive? Cover:
Hi! I have published this story just yesterday and I would be very grateful if I could get any feedback on it!
Title: Our Wedding Affair
Description: Attending her sister’s wedding, Eleanor tries to stay away from the drama that is surrounding her. Then she meets James and starts questioning her life values for the first time.
When characters are finished talking, their lips is still moving or when they’re rear positions, they’re still moving side to side (because they neutral_talk_rear, something like that). Make sure they’re in idle or idle_rear when they are suppose to finish talking.
Thank you, I’d love it if you reviewed my story Author:@stargirl4 Genre: Drama Summary: Everything about him was grey, like the smoke he exhaled. His hair, his eyes, his smoke,
his anger, his aptitude, his dreams. Cover:
Use & to spot the characters and the overlay car. When you used @ to spot the characters and the vehicle, it took a huge pause in zone 1 before coming to zone 2 and showing them. Same thing happened to this scene:
It took a huge pause before showing us the character and the background because you used @ instead of & to spot the characters
Whenever you’re using transitions, it transitions but still appears in the same background before going to the next instead of transitioning to the next background. It’s possible you’re using @transition fade out when you’re supposed to do @transition fade in and vice versa.
I really like your story, for real. I will continue like one or two chapters more. But the grammar errors kinda tick me off. I’ll suggest that you should get a proofreader before publishing so they can correct the mistakes you missed or didn’t even know they’re mistakes. I also suggest that you should get a beta-reader so they can show and tell you how to fix your directing mistakes and your storytelling! Thank you for requesting for a review. Good luck on your writing <3
Hey I would love to hear your reviews regarding my newly published story…SINISTER LOVE
Author- Mikasa and Panda
Summary- A rich and frivolous boy suddenly discovers his dark side… What impact will it have on others? Can anyone survive his murderous clutches or will everyone fall prey?
Genre: Action and Sci-fi
Summary: In a dystopian world where people with superpowers are seen are more superior to humans, you’re given an opportunity to create a life worth living. Will you prevail? And find love?
Style : ink
Is a Fantasy and Romance story
Is in INK and Limelight Author: Julina Star
A small summary of it: Sabrina live a normal life, until she meet Antonio. Old enemies are coming back, will her life change for the better or worse, follow her journey filled with lies, drama and romance Link to my story:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4630420235550720
This is my story and I hope you’ll give it a chance hehe
Title: What Women Want
Description: You left what you used to do to forget your tragic past. But, what if one day the one you left behind needed you back? Would you come back? [F MC/F LI/LIM CC/LGBTQ/MINI GAMES]
Genre: LGBTQ+, Action, & Romance
No. of Episodes: Four