:yay: Cherii's Story Reviews :yay:

ahh thank you for the review!

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I would love a review

Summary

Author: CassieC
Genre: Drama
Summary: Welcome to the Worldā€™s Most Eligible Daredevil Reality Show, where contestants must compete to win 1 Million dollars doing dangerous dares and challenges. Will you come out on top?
Cover:
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Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6531616613793792

Hope you have a chance to review my new story! I could really use some help with feedback and critiques.

Lost In The Stars

Author: Mare Acacia
Genre: Adventure
Summary: When shipwreck leaves you lost at sea with a band of pirates will you use the stars to navigate? With a nutty king on your tail and treasure on the map this sea is full of secrets.
Cover:
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Style: LL
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6008737369882624

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Hi! I hope that you can review my story when you get a chance to! Iā€™m open to both positive and negative feedback so please donā€™t hold back if thereā€™s something you donā€™t like :).

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The Good:

  • The directing is AMAZING! I loved everything about the directing throughout the whole story.
  • I love every adventure aspect throughout the story.
  • The minigames were unique & fun to completeā€™

The Ugly

  • Throughout the whole story, only the MC was in the idle animation. I tried to click the story out, restart the app, & even delete the app and get it back but the MC still stayed in that position.
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  • There is a directing malfunction here.
For Example

  • I donā€™t know if this was because of the idle animation glitch but the speech bubble wasnā€™t in the right position.
For Example

I enjoyed reading your story! It was a fun adventure while reading. If anybody is interested in adventure stories, I recommend you reading this one (:

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Thank you so much! Iā€™m not exactly sure what happened with your character but Iā€™ll look into it for sure. Iā€™m so glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the review!

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Name: Flash (complete)
Author: Hxxd ā†’ @hx.episode
Genre: Mystery
Style: INK
Chapters: 3
Status: Complete
Description: You see a chain of events, but who do they belong to, and what do they mean? Youā€™re out on a mission in search for vengeance, will you find what youā€™re looking for?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5778327886692352
Cover:
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Iā€™m still reading and reviewing! Itā€™s taking me a bit longer because of school and work but Iā€™m getting to them (:

is your story published ?

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