ahh thank you for the review!
I would love a review
Summary: Welcome to the World’s Most Eligible Daredevil Reality Show, where contestants must compete to win 1 Million dollars doing dangerous dares and challenges. Will you come out on top?
Hope you have a chance to review my new story! I could really use some help with feedback and critiques.
Lost In The Stars
Author: Mare Acacia
Summary: When shipwreck leaves you lost at sea with a band of pirates will you use the stars to navigate? With a nutty king on your tail and treasure on the map this sea is full of secrets.
Hi! I hope that you can review my story when you get a chance to! I’m open to both positive and negative feedback so please don’t hold back if there’s something you don’t like :).
- The directing is AMAZING! I loved everything about the directing throughout the whole story.
- I love every adventure aspect throughout the story.
- The minigames were unique & fun to complete’
- Throughout the whole story, only the MC was in the idle animation. I tried to click the story out, restart the app, & even delete the app and get it back but the MC still stayed in that position.
- There is a directing malfunction here.
- I don’t know if this was because of the idle animation glitch but the speech bubble wasn’t in the right position.
I enjoyed reading your story! It was a fun adventure while reading. If anybody is interested in adventure stories, I recommend you reading this one (:
Thank you so much! I’m not exactly sure what happened with your character but I’ll look into it for sure. I’m so glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the review!
Name: Flash (complete)
Author: Hxxd → @hx.episode
Description: You see a chain of events, but who do they belong to, and what do they mean? You’re out on a mission in search for vengeance, will you find what you’re looking for?
I’m still reading and reviewing! It’s taking me a bit longer because of school and work but I’m getting to them (:
is your story published ?
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