Cherry's Story Reviews 🍒 [CLOSED]

[classycherries]

Aw, don’t worry! Just keep working on your new episodes. I’ll be there to read them!

[N.Nova]

Story name: The vampire prophecy
Author: N.Nova
Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6526182039552000
Number of episodes: 4 (soon 5)

[Katie36]

Story name: Bailey Files
Author: Kate
Storylink: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5751048917811200
Number of episodes (max 5): 4

[classycherries]

STORY: Dirty Little Secret by @Daddyissues
Attention! Possible spoilers.

The Review

• Plot and writing style
At first I thought plot is going to be cliché. There are many stories about a girl falling in love with her “enemy”. I was right. That theme is pretty used, but the way you portray it… I love it so much! Comedy stories aren’t usually funny to me, but your made me laugh so much times! Even though many things happen, everything is really detailed and slow/fast enough. We can see Briella’s thoughts and feelings. You also pay attention to the other characters. We can also see their backstories! The way you write makes me really feel connected to the story.

There have been some cliché moments, but your amazing writing and funny jokes makes it all great!

I don’t really have anything more to say — everything is just so perdect!

• Cover
The cover art is sooo beautiful! And the fonts are too! I love the colours. I just suggest maybe adding Ali on the cover too, because it looks like he’s another LI. Small cover is great too!

• Title
Title sounds a little bit cliché if you ask me. It looks like it doesn’t fit the story, but maybe why it was given later.

• Description
The description really sounds cacthy, but it describes only part of the story. Maybe add something about Ali and Jazmine too!

• Grammar
I didn’t notice any mistakes!

• Directing
Your directing is amazing. I really do not have anything to say. But one thing I noticed is this: we see new scene and then the fade transition. That happens often. I think you should fix that.

Also in chapter 4:

In chapter 4 she had sports clothes on the field and stayed in the throughout the rest of the day. Wasn’t she supposed to change back into outfit we choose at the start of the chapter?

• Other
Your splashes are really cute!
Outfits and characters look amazing.
Chapter length is great!

I’m continuing with reading!

Thanks for requesting! x

[Daddyissues]

Thanks for the feedback I’ll change that football outfit though.

[Qwertyu]

Story name: Twin Troubles
Author: Qwertyu
Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5460736962002944
Number of episodes: only 1 atm

By the way it is unpublished

[JannahJackson]

Hi Jana. I’m Jannah

Story Title © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author Jannah Jackson
Story Style: Secret Surprise…you’ll find out why
Genre: Realistic-Fantasy/Mystery/ Adventure/Thriller/Horror
Story Description:
New Description:
Tales of the Old Asians warned that WW2 scars still plagued the exotic-cursed tribe in the mythical land at East South East Asia. The land of Sun, light & black magic, lies and dark secrets. Can you survive, solve the havoc, cleanse and heal, save and free everyone? Or die in vain?

Old Description:
Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you survive, solve the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? FullCC/MiniGames/Tappables

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288

Cover (With symbolic meanings of the cover inside the story)

Chapters Published: 6/7
Number of Episodes to Read 5

Additional Info:

1. Chapters are generally slightly longer than most episode stories…given because of the nature of the plot, me maximising what each episode can offer #make it count and the fact I dont feel like writing too many episodes . Hopefully ending at Chapter 7 .

2. Plot and characters may be confusing… but I try not to be. Because of their names… they are Asian names so it might be difficult to remember. But no worries.

3. There are in total of 3 MCs. But I’ll keep u guessing on who they are. 3 MCs in a sense you can see their thoughts etc and choices may appear of them. The rest are background characters so to speak but again they may not feel like background characters and you will know why later .

[Natalie_ward]

Hey, i was wondering if anyone could give me feedback on my story! if you can read all 3 x

TITLE
Only You
AUTHOR
Nataliexox
BIO
For you, saturday nights used to be sat indoors watching netflix while your friends partied. How all of that changes after one night, suddenly you become noticed, a socialite and taken by HIM. What are you going to do as cracks start to show and choices need to be made.
DESCRIPTION
I have tried my best to make the story AS customisable as i can. You choose the name for your character and your love interest. Also, you get to choose what they both look like. Choices fully start to take place after episode 3 as that is where the big choices need to be made.
STYLE
Limelight

[whirlwinder]

Hi @classycherries
I’d love a review.
Story Name: Silent Killer
Author: Rohit V.
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6387823813197824
Number of episodes: 4

[Madhu]

May i get a review?

• Story Titile: Black Hearts, Golden Desires
• Story Description: Nand, a princess of Solataria, is trained to protect her family and kingdom. What will happen if an old enemy arises for revenge?Will Nand be able to handle the storm coming her way?
• Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5019562149478400
• Story Genre: Fantasy
• Story Status: Ongoing
• Chapters : 8
• Cover:
  

[Yasmin8642]

Story name: His Family
Author: Yasmin.B
Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5594308274814976
Number of episodes: 5

[Bithi]

Hey I want you to review my story
This one is my story

Episode Nickname : Bithi
Story Title : No More
Story Genre : Romance
Description : When Reine was focused with her life, a stranger grabbed her attention and take her to an adventurous journey of lot’s of secrets, a journey filled with love and lust. xXx
Style : Limelight
Options : CC, Choices matter.
Episodes : 5
Instagram : @thebee.episode
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6270047503056896

[Lizzethx]

Thank you for this thread.

Tough Love

Author: Lizzeth

Chapters: 3

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Tough Love

[Mellisa2731]

Hey thank you so much for doing this!
Story name: AW:Imprinted
Author: Mellisa2731
Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6475926547529728
Number of episodes (max 5): 3

[missella.epi]

Story Title: Look Into My Eyes
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6450864316547072
Author Name: Miss Ella
Description: Allison is sent on a mission to take down the most feared mafia leader in the country Dante Carozza. But what will happen when he gets to her first?
Genre: Romance/Drama
How many Chapters you want me to read: 3
Additional notes: Make sure that when you look up the story on the app it has this cover.
Thank you so much:)

[Maria_P_Whiberlli]

Hi Cherry! (Can I call you that, is it too forward? Sry)
I just wanted to thank you for this thread. I really need some criticism to improve. I also wanted to make a review request. (obviously)
Here’s the stuff!
Story name: Feminism
Author: Maria P. Whiberlli
Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4809427874873344
Number of episodes (max 5): Only the first. The others are locked.
Cant wait to see it!

[IAmEms]

heyy looking forward to your feedback!!
Title: AW: Dawn of Resurgence
Author: Ems
Episodes: 3 (more coming soon)
Link:
http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6388508112781312