Review Completed for @MTB
Story Cover & Description: I like the cover a lot. The description is good, but can be improved. (8)
Plot: The plot is good. I couldn’t figure out the main objective of the story. (9)
Characters: According to me, there were lots of characters. It was confusing and also hard to remember them and their names. The characters have different and interesting personalities. I definitely ship Joon & Precious and Beverly & Will. (4)
Length: The first episode had a reasonable length. (5)
Grammar: Didn’t find any mistakes, but a few commas were missing. (9)
What I think about the Story: Adding your story to my favourites. I did find a mistake at the end of the first episode. Precious was a lot taller and bigger than Mira. Need to fix that. (10)
Total: 45/50