Review Completed for @Grottino
Story Cover & Description: The story cover and description is okay. Can be improved, though… (7)
Plot: It’s different and interesting. It’s my first time reading a book a bit related to lyrical opera. (9)
Characters: I LOVED Beepe and his family! They are really supportive and his parents don’t judge him based on his sexuality. I didn’t like the MC’s parents, though… (9.5)
Length: The first episode was a bit short… You could add a bit more. (6)
Grammar: Didn’t find mistakes in spellings, but commas were missing. (9)
What I think about the Story: It is a rare story. There are only a few stories with music as their kinda main objective. You could try fixing the things I mentioned above. (9)
Total: 49.5/50