ChicBear's Story Review Thread 🎀 [CLOSE TILL CATCH UP]

Review Completed for @Faith.episode.cats

Story Cover & Description: The cover is cute but the description can be improved. It has a few grammatical mistakes. (8)

Plot: The plot is… quite common. It’s a typical hate-to-love high school story. That makes it a bit common… (5)

Characters: I’ve seen characters with mental problems and such in lots of stories. I think the characters should be a bit nicer. Everyone is rude and arrogant. But, I love Samantha, she’s a total weirdo! :star_struck: (2)

Length: It was long and I like it. For me, it’s an enjoyable length. (4)

Grammar: I saw many mistakes. Spellings were fine, but punctuations weren’t correct and the words weren’t in correct order. You could get someone to proofread your story. (3)

What I think about the Story: I’ve seen stories like these, before. Maybe, add a few plot twists…? And, please don’t get offended, it’s just my opinion. (6)

Total: 28/50

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