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Title: A Prince’s Curse By: lanafrazer_episode Instagram: lanafrazer.episode Genre: Fantasy Episodes: 3 Style: Limelight Description: Cursed for eternity, shocked by his betrothed, he will not stop until he finds a solution to end his curse. What will become of his betrothed? Will he find a cure or love? Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6490473514205184
Story Cover & Description: The cover was amazing. Loved it! And the description was good. (10)
Plot: The plot was really interesting. It’s different from most of the other fantasy stories. (10)
Characters: The characters were creative. Love the names and their personalities. I especially liked when Zeke called Eve ‘sugar puff’ and she got annoyed. It’s like any other sibling. (5)
Length: The length was good. I imagined it to be longer, though… (4)
Grammar: Couldn’t find any mistakes. (10)
What I think about the Story: It’s really interesting and would attract readers. I think a bit more about their past should be added in the first episode. Overall, it’s a unique story. (9)
tysm hun! glad you enjoyed it! and I hope you would continue and well the length is average so it depends on how fast the reader can read the lines. dont worry about the past hun it will be in upcoming episode just dont want to dump much info on you guys and well i thought it would be good to understand the characters.
overall i am so so happy that you enjoyed!
Story Cover & Description: I like the cover a lot. The description is good, but can be improved. (8)
Plot: The plot is good. I couldn’t figure out the main objective of the story. (9)
Characters: According to me, there were lots of characters. It was confusing and also hard to remember them and their names. The characters have different and interesting personalities. I definitely ship Joon & Precious and Beverly & Will. (4)
Length: The first episode had a reasonable length. (5)
Grammar: Didn’t find any mistakes, but a few commas were missing. (9)
What I think about the Story: Adding your story to my favourites. I did find a mistake at the end of the first episode. Precious was a lot taller and bigger than Mira. Need to fix that. (10)
Thank you for the review!
I know having so many main characters can get confusing but I couldn’t help myself
And I just want to add that Mira is supposed to be smaller than everyone else.
Story Cover & Description: The story cover and description is okay. Can be improved, though… (7)
Plot: It’s different and interesting. It’s my first time reading a book a bit related to lyrical opera. (9)
Characters: I LOVED Beepe and his family! They are really supportive and his parents don’t judge him based on his sexuality. I didn’t like the MC’s parents, though… (9.5)
Length: The first episode was a bit short… You could add a bit more. (6)
Grammar: Didn’t find mistakes in spellings, but commas were missing. (9)
What I think about the Story: It is a rare story. There are only a few stories with music as their kinda main objective. You could try fixing the things I mentioned above. (9)
Story Cover & Description: The cover is cute but the description can be improved. It has a few grammatical mistakes. (8)
Plot: The plot is… quite common. It’s a typical hate-to-love high school story. That makes it a bit common… (5)
Characters: I’ve seen characters with mental problems and such in lots of stories. I think the characters should be a bit nicer. Everyone is rude and arrogant. But, I love Samantha, she’s a total weirdo! (2)
Length: It was long and I like it. For me, it’s an enjoyable length. (4)
Grammar: I saw many mistakes. Spellings were fine, but punctuations weren’t correct and the words weren’t in correct order. You could get someone to proofread your story. (3)
What I think about the Story: I’ve seen stories like these, before. Maybe, add a few plot twists…? And, please don’t get offended, it’s just my opinion. (6)
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