Choice help (asap pls)

its supposed ti be a choice within a choice but for some reason the “go as fast as possible” is in the main choice when its supposed to be in the split up option. can someone help me fix it?

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choice
“Split Up” {

gain SPLIT

@THOMAS -1
@BLAKE +1

    GRACE
If someone is hurt we need to find them as soon as possible.

    GRACE
We should split up, its more efficient.

    GRACE
Ill try to find a higher area to get a good view of what we're dealing with

    THOMAS
Yea, you do that.

    THOMAS
Ill search the perimeter of the island and hope for a sign of life.

@follow GRACE to screen center in zone 1 AND GRACE is walk_worried_loop

    GRACE (think_rubchin)
(Ill have to go inside the jungle to find a better spot.)

choice
“Take It slow” {

gain caution

@THOMAS +1

@GRACE exits left AND GRACE is walk_sneak_loop

EXT. JUNGLE PAN - DAY

music off
sound off

@cut to zone 3

@GRACE enters from right to screen center AND GRACE is walk_worried_loop
@BLAKE stands screen center in zone 2

@GRACE faces right AND GRACE is react_startled_subtle

    GRACE
What was that noise?

@follow GRACE to screen center in zone 2 AND GRACE faces right AND GRACE is walk_sneak_loop
&GRACE is fall AND BLAKE is react_angry_shakefists

}

} “Go as fast as possible” {

gain wreckless

@BLAKE +1

@GRACE exits left AND GRACE is run_super_speed_loop

EXT. JUNGLE PAN - DAY

@cut to zone 3

@GRACE enters from right to screen center AND GRACE is run_super_speed_loop
@BLAKE stands screen center in zone 2

@GRACE is think_rubchin

    GRACE
It sounds peaceful

choice
“KEEP AHEAD” {

@follow GRACE to screen center in zone 2 AND GRACE is run_super_speed_loop
&GRACE is fall AND BLAKE is react_angry_shakefists

}

} “Stay Together” {

gain STAYED

@THOMAS +1
@BLAKE -1

    GRACE
I think we should stay together, its much safer and we wont get seperated.

    GRACE
Getting lost is the last thing we need right now.

}

like this? there right now is a choice inside of a choice xx
@moldyrice

choice
“Split Up” {

gain SPLIT

@THOMAS -1
@BLAKE +1

GRACE

If someone is hurt we need to find them as soon as possible.

GRACE

We should split up, its more efficient.

GRACE

Ill try to find a higher area to get a good view of what we’re dealing with

THOMAS

Yea, you do that.

THOMAS

Ill search the perimeter of the island and hope for a sign of life.
@follow GRACE to screen center in zone 1 AND GRACE is walk_worried_loop

GRACE (think_rubchin)

(Ill have to go inside the jungle to find a better spot.)
choice
“Take It slow” {

gain caution

@THOMAS +1

@GRACE exits left AND GRACE is walk_sneak_loop

EXT. JUNGLE PAN - DAY

music off
sound off

@cut to zone 3

@GRACE enters from right to screen center AND GRACE is walk_worried_loop
@BLAKE stands screen center in zone 2

@GRACE faces right AND GRACE is react_startled_subtle

GRACE

What was that noise?
@follow GRACE to screen center in zone 2 AND GRACE faces right AND GRACE is walk_sneak_loop
&GRACE is fall AND BLAKE is react_angry_shakefists
}“Go as fast as possible” {

gain wreckless

@BLAKE +1

@GRACE exits left AND GRACE is run_super_speed_loop

EXT. JUNGLE PAN - DAY

@cut to zone 3

@GRACE enters from right to screen center AND GRACE is run_super_speed_loop
@BLAKE stands screen center in zone 2

@GRACE is think_rubchin
}

GRACE

It sounds peaceful
choice
“KEEP AHEAD” {

@follow GRACE to screen center in zone 2 AND GRACE is run_super_speed_loop
&GRACE is fall AND BLAKE is react_angry_shakefists

}

} “tay Together” {

gain STAYED

@THOMAS +1
@BLAKE -1

GRACE

I think we should stay together, its much safer and we wont get seperated.

GRACE

Getting lost is the last thing we need right now.
}

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