CHOICE points help!

-Im confused so basically, i created 3 choices which if you get right you get 1 point from each.
The problem is ! that it seems to me that if i get 2 out of 3 questions right which means i have 2 points it goes straight to “you werent thinking” which isnt right because i coded out that if you get more than one point you get a “good job” from the narrator so can anyone tell me what i did wrong here

• the choices are not included so if you need the script i will gladly give

-But in the last part i coded this out here in the bottom

if (ZAIN >1){
@speechbubble is 156 199 to 121%
NARRATOR
Good job ! you are | color:blue | talking buisness

@ZAIN is yawn_bored
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_neutral)
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Ye this sh*t is gonna be easy
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_explain_neutral)
Trust me man you dont wanna underestimate my job

@ZAIN is eyeroll_sarcastic

}else{
@speechbubble is 156 199 to 121%
NARRATOR (EVA THE AUTHOR)
Come on ! you can do better ! | color:blue | you werent thinking
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
Some one slap me !?

``````    AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
I hope you listened to what i told you or else this is the last time ill see you
``````

@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Relax man i got it i heard ya the second time so dont worry
}

so above what i coded does it mean that if

• the character ZAIN gets more than one point he recieves “good job” from the narrator

-but if not and he gets just one point or bellow he gets a “you werent thinking” from the narrator

which is what i coded out and how i wanted it

*let me know if i understood the coding wrong

Can I see a screenshot from the script?? It’s more clear that way

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sure you can even test it out and see what i mean, but im going to copy and paste the script

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here !

@pause for 3
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_explain_neutral)
What is the distance between you and the man you are spying on ?

@ZAIN =0

``````    AIDEN (talk_explain_neutral)
What is the distance between you and the man you are spying on ?
``````

choice [timed:20]
“Very very very far away so that i can only just see him”
{
@ZAIN -1
@ZAIN is eyeroll_subtle
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Very very very far away so that i can only just see him
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
Come on man ! you have to be far but close enough to hear him
AIDEN (sigh_disappointed)
Next question
}
“Far enough so that he doesnt see me but close enough to hear this guy”
{
@ZAIN +1
@ZAIN is eyeroll_subtle
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Far enough so that he doesnt see me but close enough to hear this guy
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
Correct !

}
“…”
{
@ZAIN -1
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop)

@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (sigh_disappointed)
Cmon man i havent even said it too long ago
AIDEN (talk_explain_neutral)
You have to be far but close enough so that you hear him
}

@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_neutral)
What do you do if he gets suspicious of you ?

choice [timed:20]
“run away?”
{
@ZAIN -1
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Run away?
@AIDEN is sigh_disappointed
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_explain_neutral)
Seriously man, your going to get your self killed listen to me carefully
AIDEN (talk_explain_neutral)
You have to do anything normal to catch him offgaurd
Last question
}
“do anything to act normal to catch him offgaurd”
{
@ZAIN +1

@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Do anything to act normal to catch him offgaurd
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
Good job man
Last question

}
“um…go up to him? I honestly dont know man ?”
{
@ZAIN -1
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Um…go up to him? I honestly dont know man
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (sigh_disappointed)
Seriously that was common sense !

@ZAIN is eyeroll_sarcastic
AIDEN (talk_neutral)
Ok last question
}

@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_neutral)
Ok this is a matter of being smart
AIDEN (talk_neutral)
Where would you put the micrphone?

choice [timed:20]
“underneath the table where he cant see it”
{
@ZAIN +1
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Underneath the table where he cant see it
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_neutral)
Yup !

}
“On his shoes”
{
@ZAIN -1
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
On his shoes
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
Anywhere else but on them !
@ZAIN is yawn_bored
@pause for 3
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)
What ? im just not feeling it

}
“On the gaurds…”{
@ZAIN -1
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
On the gaurds
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
Bro ! are you stupid
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Chill old man
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
Its anywhere else but on them !

}

if (ZAIN >1){
@speechbubble is 156 199 to 121%
NARRATOR
Good job ! you are | color:blue | talking buisness

@ZAIN is yawn_bored
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_neutral)
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Ye this sh*t is gonna be easy
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_explain_neutral)
Trust me man you dont wanna underestimate my job

@ZAIN is eyeroll_sarcastic

}else{
@speechbubble is 156 199 to 121%
NARRATOR (EVA THE AUTHOR)
Come on ! you can do better ! | color:blue | you werent thinking
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
Some one slap me !?

``````    AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
I hope you listened to what i told you or else this is the last time ill see you
``````

@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Relax man i got it i heard ya the second time so dont worry
}

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Weird… I don’t see any error. Does any warning appear?

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no its not that its just the whole point system is wrong

It looks good to me… Maybe it’s not showing you the right script because you previewed the story multiple times and you keep gaining points. You know how to restart those? I can show you how

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i added @ZAIN =0 before the choices was that right ?

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Yeah, that works too!
And even though you had zero at the start, if you gained points still didn’t showed you the right scene?

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yes correct but why does it do that ? and how can i fix it ?

(Just copying this so I can see it better)

@ZAIN =0

``````    AIDEN (talk_explain_neutral)
What is the distance between you and the man you are spying on ?
``````

choice [timed:20]
“Very very very far away so that i can only just see him”
{
@ZAIN -1
}
“Far enough so that he doesnt see me but close enough to hear this guy”
{
@ZAIN +1
}
“…”
{
@ZAIN -1
}

AIDEN (talk_neutral)
What do you do if he gets suspicious of you ?

choice [timed:20]
“run away?”
{
@ZAIN -1
}
“do anything to act normal to catch him offgaurd”
{
@ZAIN +1
}
“um…go up to him? I honestly dont know man ?”
{
@ZAIN -1
}

Where would you put the micrphone?

choice [timed:20]
“underneath the table where he cant see it”
{
@ZAIN +1
}
“On his shoes”
{
@ZAIN -1
}
“On the gaurds…”{
@ZAIN -1
}

if (ZAIN >1){
NARRATOR
Good job ! you are | color:blue | talking buisness

}else{

``````AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
``````

I hope you listened to what i told you or else this is the last time ill see you

}

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do you want me to copy and paste this on to my episode story and play it ?

No, no! It was just so I can see it clearer

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oh okay np

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That’s very weird, I don’t see any problem… Have you tried refreshing the page?? I will think it over

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i think i already did that but let me go ahead and try it

nope ! if i get 2 questions right out of 3 it still gives me the wrong scene
but i suggest you copy and paste and play it with different characters so you will know what i mean but you dont have to

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OK FOUND MY PROBLEM !!! omg i had to put
if(ZAIN >0) not 1 instead of zero

I’ll try it!

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