CHOICE points help!

[Moonlight_bvby]

-Im confused so basically, i created 3 choices which if you get right you get 1 point from each.
The problem is ! that it seems to me that if i get 2 out of 3 questions right which means i have 2 points it goes straight to “you werent thinking” which isnt right because i coded out that if you get more than one point you get a “good job” from the narrator so can anyone tell me what i did wrong here

• the choices are not included so if you need the script i will gladly give

-But in the last part i coded this out here in the bottom

if (ZAIN >1){
@speechbubble is 156 199 to 121%
NARRATOR
Good job ! you are | color:blue | talking buisness

@ZAIN is yawn_bored
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_neutral)
Yea good job man ! your ready
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Ye this sh*t is gonna be easy
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_explain_neutral)
Trust me man you dont wanna underestimate my job

@ZAIN is eyeroll_sarcastic

}else{
@speechbubble is 156 199 to 121%
NARRATOR (EVA THE AUTHOR)
Come on ! you can do better ! | color:blue | you werent thinking
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
Some one slap me !?

    AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
I hope you listened to what i told you or else this is the last time ill see you

@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Relax man i got it i heard ya the second time so dont worry
}

so above what i coded does it mean that if

• the character ZAIN gets more than one point he recieves “good job” from the narrator

-but if not and he gets just one point or bellow he gets a “you werent thinking” from the narrator

which is what i coded out and how i wanted it

*let me know if i understood the coding wrong

[Bertha]

Can I see a screenshot from the script?? It’s more clear that way

[Moonlight_bvby]

sure you can even test it out and see what i mean, but im going to copy and paste the script

[Moonlight_bvby]

here !

readerMessage your about to do choices which determines if “your talking buisness” or if “your not thinking”

@pause for 3
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_explain_neutral)
What is the distance between you and the man you are spying on ?

@ZAIN =0

    AIDEN (talk_explain_neutral)
What is the distance between you and the man you are spying on ?

choice [timed:20]
“Very very very far away so that i can only just see him”
{
@ZAIN -1
readerMessage -1
@ZAIN is eyeroll_subtle
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Very very very far away so that i can only just see him
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
Come on man ! you have to be far but close enough to hear him
AIDEN (sigh_disappointed)
Next question
}
“Far enough so that he doesnt see me but close enough to hear this guy”
{
@ZAIN +1
readerMessage +1
@ZAIN is eyeroll_subtle
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Far enough so that he doesnt see me but close enough to hear this guy
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
Correct !

}
“…”
{
@ZAIN -1
readerMessage -1
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
…
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (sigh_disappointed)
Cmon man i havent even said it too long ago
AIDEN (talk_explain_neutral)
You have to be far but close enough so that you hear him
}

@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_neutral)
What do you do if he gets suspicious of you ?

choice [timed:20]
“run away?”
{
@ZAIN -1
readerMessage -1
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Run away?
@AIDEN is sigh_disappointed
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_explain_neutral)
Seriously man, your going to get your self killed listen to me carefully
AIDEN (talk_explain_neutral)
You have to do anything normal to catch him offgaurd
Last question
}
“do anything to act normal to catch him offgaurd”
{
@ZAIN +1
readerMessage +1

@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Do anything to act normal to catch him offgaurd
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
Good job man
Last question

}
“um…go up to him? I honestly dont know man ?”
{
@ZAIN -1
readerMessage -1
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Um…go up to him? I honestly dont know man
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (sigh_disappointed)
Seriously that was common sense !

@ZAIN is eyeroll_sarcastic
AIDEN (talk_neutral)
Ok last question
}

@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_neutral)
Ok this is a matter of being smart
AIDEN (talk_neutral)
Where would you put the micrphone?

choice [timed:20]
“underneath the table where he cant see it”
{
@ZAIN +1
readerMessage +1
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Underneath the table where he cant see it
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_neutral)
Yup !

}
“On his shoes”
{
@ZAIN -1
readerMessage -1
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
On his shoes
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
Your stupid
AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
Anywhere else but on them !
@ZAIN is yawn_bored
@pause for 3
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)
What ? im just not feeling it

}
“On the gaurds…”{
@ZAIN -1
readerMessage -1
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
On the gaurds
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
Bro ! are you stupid
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Chill old man
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
Its anywhere else but on them !

}

if (ZAIN >1){
@speechbubble is 156 199 to 121%
NARRATOR
Good job ! you are | color:blue | talking buisness

@ZAIN is yawn_bored
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_neutral)
Yea good job man ! your ready
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Ye this sh*t is gonna be easy
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_explain_neutral)
Trust me man you dont wanna underestimate my job

@ZAIN is eyeroll_sarcastic

}else{
@speechbubble is 156 199 to 121%
NARRATOR (EVA THE AUTHOR)
Come on ! you can do better ! | color:blue | you werent thinking
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
Some one slap me !?

    AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
I hope you listened to what i told you or else this is the last time ill see you

@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Relax man i got it i heard ya the second time so dont worry
}

[Bertha]

Weird… I don’t see any error. Does any warning appear?

[Moonlight_bvby]

no its not that its just the whole point system is wrong

[Bertha]

It looks good to me… Maybe it’s not showing you the right script because you previewed the story multiple times and you keep gaining points. You know how to restart those? I can show you how

[Moonlight_bvby]

i added @ZAIN =0 before the choices was that right ?

[Bertha]

Yeah, that works too!
And even though you had zero at the start, if you gained points still didn’t showed you the right scene?

[Moonlight_bvby]

yes correct but why does it do that ? and how can i fix it ?

[Bertha]

(Just copying this so I can see it better)

@ZAIN =0

    AIDEN (talk_explain_neutral)
What is the distance between you and the man you are spying on ?

choice [timed:20]
“Very very very far away so that i can only just see him”
{
@ZAIN -1
}
“Far enough so that he doesnt see me but close enough to hear this guy”
{
@ZAIN +1
}
“…”
{
@ZAIN -1
}

AIDEN (talk_neutral)
What do you do if he gets suspicious of you ?

choice [timed:20]
“run away?”
{
@ZAIN -1
}
“do anything to act normal to catch him offgaurd”
{
@ZAIN +1
}
“um…go up to him? I honestly dont know man ?”
{
@ZAIN -1
}

Where would you put the micrphone?

choice [timed:20]
“underneath the table where he cant see it”
{
@ZAIN +1
}
“On his shoes”
{
@ZAIN -1
}
“On the gaurds…”{
@ZAIN -1
}

if (ZAIN >1){
NARRATOR
Good job ! you are | color:blue | talking buisness

}else{

AIDEN (talk_apathetic)

I hope you listened to what i told you or else this is the last time ill see you

}

[Moonlight_bvby]

do you want me to copy and paste this on to my episode story and play it ?

[Bertha]

No, no! It was just so I can see it clearer

[Moonlight_bvby]

oh okay np

[Bertha]

That’s very weird, I don’t see any problem… Have you tried refreshing the page?? I will think it over

[Moonlight_bvby]

i think i already did that but let me go ahead and try it

[Moonlight_bvby]

nope ! if i get 2 questions right out of 3 it still gives me the wrong scene
but i suggest you copy and paste and play it with different characters so you will know what i mean but you dont have to

[Moonlight_bvby]

OK FOUND MY PROBLEM !!! omg i had to put
if(ZAIN >0) not 1 instead of zero

[Bertha]

I’ll try it!